记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích chi tiết với các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

示例: Honestly, I am not very good at memorising things because I often have many tasks to handle. For instance, I sometimes forget deadlines or small tests if I don't write them down. Therefore, I try to keep notes to help me remember important details.

建议: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và nói lắp. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên từ để câu chuyện mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as my husband's birthday. He was very upset, and I felt really sorry. I apologized to him several times and promised myself not to forget it again.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things because I have responsibilities at work and also teach extra classes at home. For example, I have to keep track of tasks, important details, and prepare materials like photocopies.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I think that if something is very important to me, I can remember it easily because I keep it in my mind. However, for less important things, I prefer to write notes so that I can keep track of them more easily.

× I don't consider myself as a person who have the very good memory.

✓ I don't consider myself a person who has a very good memory.

The pronoun 'myself' is correctly used, but the phrase 'consider myself as' is incorrect; 'consider myself a person' is correct. Also, 'who have' should be 'who has' to agree with the singular 'person'.

× I guess the reason for that is I have a lot of thing on my place, therefore I usually forget about small details.

✓ I guess the reason for that is I have a lot of things in my place, so I usually forget small details.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'on my place' is incorrect preposition usage; 'in my place' is correct. 'Therefore' is better replaced with 'so' for natural flow.

× For example, I usually forget about the deadlines to submit the thing that I need to do or also minor test if I don't write them down.

✓ For example, I usually forget about the deadlines to submit the things that I need to do or also minor tests if I don't write them down.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' and 'minor test' should be plural 'minor tests' to match the plural context.

× Yeah, of course everybody made mistake and also I'm not the exception.

✓ Yeah, of course everybody makes mistakes and I'm not the exception.

The present tense 'makes' is appropriate here because the statement is general. Also, 'made mistake' should be 'makes mistakes' to agree with 'everybody' and plural form.

× I also forget, uh, an important day, which is my husband's birthday.

✓ I also forget, uh, an important day, which is my husband's birthday.

This sentence is acceptable in present tense to express habitual action; no correction needed.

× He was very upset and I am very.

✓ He was very upset and I was very upset too.

The phrase 'I am very' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'I was very upset too' to match the past tense and complete the thought.

× I have to APO apologize him for several times and I have to promise myself that I would never do that again.

✓ I have to apologize to him several times and I have to promise myself that I would never do that again.

'Apologize' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. 'APO' seems to be a typo and should be removed.

× There are a lot of thing that I need to remember in my daily lives because as a matter of fact I have to prepare a lot like for all the things that I need to do at work and also I have the extra classes at home.

✓ There are a lot of things that I need to remember in my daily life because, as a matter of fact, I have to prepare a lot for all the things that I need to do at work and also I have extra classes at home.

'Thing' should be plural 'things'. 'Daily lives' should be singular 'daily life' as it refers to the speaker's life. Added commas for clarity.

× It means like I have double thing that I need to do.

✓ It means I have double the things that I need to do.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'double the things'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here.

× So I have to remember the task, the details, the photocopies, the.

✓ So I have to remember the tasks, the details, the photocopies, etc.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'etc.' completes the list and improves sentence structure.

× I believe that if the things are very important to me, I don't need to take much effort in order to remember that, because they have very important and I already put it in my mind.

✓ I believe that if things are very important to me, I don't need to put much effort into remembering them, because they are very important and I have already put them in my mind.

'The things' should be 'things' for generalization. 'Take much effort' is better as 'put much effort into'. 'Remember that' should be 'remembering them' to match plural. 'They have very important' is incorrect; should be 'they are very important'. 'Put it in my mind' should be 'put them in my mind' to agree with plural.

× But with something that are less important, I prefer to write down some note so that it will easier for me to keep track on it.

✓ But with things that are less important, I prefer to write down some notes so that it will be easier for me to keep track of them.

'Something that are' is incorrect; should be 'things that are'. 'Some note' should be 'some notes' to match plural. 'Keep track on it' should be 'keep track of them' for correct preposition and pronoun agreement.