记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为自然，但表达略显冗长且缺乏连贯的连接词。建议在回答时使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性，同时避免重复表达。

示例: I'm not very good at memorizing things because it usually takes me a lot of time, especially when I was in high school and had to remember a lot of academic content.

建议: 回答简洁且直接，但可以通过添加具体例子或细节使内容更丰富，同时使用连接词如“so”来增强连贯性。

示例: No, I don't forget important things because I always write them down on my phone or paper, so I can check them whenever needed. For example, I once had an important meeting and my reminder helped me arrive on time.

建议: 回答中句子结构较复杂且缺少适当的连接词，建议简化句子并使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”使表达更清晰。

示例: Since I just graduated last month and haven't found a job yet, I only need to remember small chores in my daily life, such as cleaning and sweeping.

建议: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子衔接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词如“which”或“so”来使句子更流畅。

示例: I always write important things on my phone using a reminder app, which arranges tasks by priority, so it's very convenient and efficient for me.

× I always used a lot of time to do it.

✓ I always used a lot of time to do it.

该句中“used”是过去时，符合上下文描述过去的情况，无需修改。

× No, I don't forget something important because if I have something to do that is vital, I always write it on my phone or paper to remind me.

✓ No, I don't forget anything important because if I have something vital to do, I always write it on my phone or paper to remind myself.

“something important”应改为“anything important”以符合否定句的用法；“to remind me”应改为“to remind myself”，因为提醒的动作是针对说话者自己，反身代词更合适。

× Nowadays because I just graduated from university last month and don't find a job so I only need to remember some small chores in my daily life such as cleaning or sweeping.

✓ Nowadays, because I just graduated from university last month and haven't found a job, I only need to remember some small chores in my daily life such as cleaning or sweeping.

句中缺少逗号分隔状语；“don't find a job”时态不对，应为现在完成时“haven't found a job”；连接词“so”用法不当，改为逗号更合适。

× I always write important things on my phone to remind me, such as a reminder app.

✓ I always write important things on my phone to remind myself, such as using a reminder app.

“to remind me”应改为“to remind myself”，因为提醒的动作是针对说话者自己；“such as a reminder app”表达不完整，补充“using”使句子更通顺。

× They always arrange my important things by their priority that is convenient and efficient.

✓ It always arranges my important things by their priority, which is convenient and efficient.

“They”指代不明确，应用单数“it”指代“reminder app”；“that”应改为“which”引导非限制性定语从句；句中缺少逗号。