记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「taking bad scores or memorizing tests」は意味が不明瞭で、より明確な表現が必要です。また、文が長くなりすぎているため、簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was in junior high school, I often struggled to remember information for tests, which affected my scores.

建议: 時制の誤りや語順の問題があります（例："forgot"は過去形なので"often"と組み合わせるのは不自然）。また、文の構造が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。より正確な文法と明確な表現を心がけましょう。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my shift at my part-time job. My boss called me to remind me that I was supposed to work on Wednesday, but I didn't go and was scolded.

建议: 話がまとまっておらず、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。例えば、「I'm promising with other people」は不自然で、「appointments」や「plans」と言い換えると良いでしょう。話を簡潔にし、明確な構造で答えることを意識してください。

示例: I need to remember my daily schedule, especially appointments with other people. Also, I try to remember what I studied at university and high school so I don't forget important information.

建议: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます（例：「I am scheduled up」は意味不明）。また、繰り返しが多く、簡潔にまとめることが必要です。より自然な表現と明確な構造を心がけましょう。

示例: I usually remember important things by reviewing them frequently. Also, keeping a schedule or planner helps me not to forget important tasks.

× I often forgot the shift of my part time job.

✓ I often forgot the shift of my part-time job.

The phrase 'part time job' should be hyphenated as 'part-time job' because it is a compound adjective describing the noun 'job'. This is a punctuation issue rather than a tense issue, but since the sentence is in past tense and the error relates to word form, it is categorized here for clarity.

× My boss called me on my telephone and I realize that I should have to go on Wednesday my office, but I didn't and I was very scolded.

✓ My boss called me on my telephone and I realized that I should have gone to my office on Wednesday, but I didn't and I was scolded a lot.

The verb 'realize' should be in past tense 'realized' to match the past tense context. The phrase 'should have to go' is incorrect; it should be 'should have gone' to express obligation in the past. The phrase 'on Wednesday my office' is incorrect word order; it should be 'to my office on Wednesday'. 'I was very scolded' is unnatural; 'I was scolded a lot' is more natural English.

× I think I have to remember about my entire schedules, especially I'm, I'm promising with other people and, uh, additionally, I have to memorize other things that I studied in my university and high school because I don't want them to like forget and.

✓ I think I have to remember my entire schedule, especially when I'm making promises with other people, and additionally, I have to memorize other things that I studied at my university and high school because I don't want to forget them.

The preposition 'about' after 'remember' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'remember' does not require 'about'. 'Entire schedules' should be singular 'entire schedule' because 'schedule' is usually uncountable or singular in this context. 'I'm promising with other people' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making promises with other people'. The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to 'university and high school'. The phrase 'I don't want them to like forget and' is incomplete and awkward; it should be 'I don't want to forget them'.

× I usually try to remember things by checking things that I want to memorize very frequently so that I cannot forget and also I am scheduled up can be very helpful for me.

✓ I usually try to remember things by checking the things that I want to memorize very frequently so that I cannot forget, and also, having a schedule can be very helpful for me.

The phrase 'I am scheduled up' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'having a schedule' or 'keeping a schedule'. The sentence also needs a comma before 'and also' to separate the clauses properly. The phrase 'checking things that I want to memorize very frequently' is acceptable but could be improved by adding 'the' before 'things' for clarity.