记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınız təbii və mövzuyla əlaqəlidir, amma cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlamalar var. Daha qısa və aydın ifadələr istifadə edin, məsələn, "I am generally good at remembering past events, but I struggle with memorizing numbers like birthdays."

示例: I am generally good at remembering past events, but I struggle with memorizing numbers like birthdays, which is why I often forget my close friends' birthdays.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və təkrarlamalar var, fikrinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin. Məsələn, "Yes, I once forgot my close friend's birthday, and she was upset with me."

示例: Yes, I once forgot my close friend's birthday, and she was upset with me because I didn't attend the celebration.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Daha aydın və düzgün ifadə edin, məsələn, "I often forget to turn off the lights when I leave my room, which sometimes makes my brother angry."

示例: I often forget to turn off the lights when I leave my room, which sometimes makes my brother angry, so I am trying to be more careful.

建议: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha təbii və aydın ifadə edin, məsələn, "I use my phone to take notes of important things like birthdays and important sentences."

示例: I use my phone to take notes of important things like birthdays and important sentences, which helps me remember them better.

× I often forget my close friend birthday.

✓ I often forget my close friend's birthday.

The phrase 'close friend birthday' lacks the possessive form. In English, to show possession, we add an apostrophe and 's' to the noun. Therefore, it should be 'close friend's birthday'. This is a singular possessive form indicating the birthday belonging to the close friend.

× I am not good at.

✓ I am not good at it.

The phrase 'I am not good at' is incomplete because the preposition 'at' requires an object. Adding 'it' completes the phrase, making it grammatically correct.

× I mentioned I am not glad I memorized the birthdays and one day I forgot my close friend's birthday.

✓ I mentioned I am not good at memorizing birthdays and one day I forgot my close friend's birthday.

The phrase 'I am not glad I memorized the birthdays' is awkward and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'I am not good at memorizing birthdays'. Also, 'memorized' is past tense, but the context requires a general ability, so the gerund form 'memorizing' is appropriate.

× I didn't go there. So that's why, that's why he that's why she offended for me for.

✓ I didn't go there. So that's why she was offended by me.

The phrase 'she offended for me for' is incorrect. The correct passive form is 'she was offended by me'. The preposition 'by' is used to indicate the agent in passive voice.

× I have also problems with the electrics.

✓ I also have problems with the electricity.

The word 'electrics' is incorrect in this context. The correct noun is 'electricity' which is uncountable. Also, the word order is improved by placing 'also' after the subject 'I'.

× I generally forget 10 out of the lights.

✓ I generally forget to turn off the lights.

The phrase 'forget 10 out of the lights' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely forgetting to turn off the lights. Therefore, the correction clarifies the action.

× I'm trying to pay attention about turning off the lights.

✓ I'm trying to pay attention to turning off the lights.

The verb phrase 'pay attention' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'about'. Therefore, 'pay attention to' is correct.

× Sometimes my brother gets angry about.

✓ Sometimes my brother gets angry about it.

The phrase 'gets angry about' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'it' clarifies what he is angry about.

× I used some methods for remembering important things, especially using my using notes on my phone.

✓ I use some methods for remembering important things, especially using notes on my phone.

The phrase 'used some methods' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'use' is better. Also, 'using my using notes' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'using notes'.

× I wrote important things such as birthday dates or such as important words, important sentence like this.

✓ I write important things such as birthday dates or important words and sentences like these.

The verb tense is changed to present to indicate habitual action. Also, 'important sentence' should be plural 'sentences' to match 'words'. The phrase 'such as' is used once before the list. 'Like this' is corrected to 'like these' to agree with plural nouns.

× Sometimes I noted important.

✓ Sometimes I note important things.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. 'Noted' is past tense, but the context suggests habitual action, so 'note' is better. Adding 'things' completes the sentence.