记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，且句子结构混乱。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充具体原因，避免重复和不连贯。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details easily. However, sometimes forgetting helps me focus on more important tasks.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议用简洁的句子描述具体的例子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, I sometimes leave my PE kit at home and have to ask my parents to bring it to me.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，避免无关或模糊的表达。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember assignment deadlines because if I miss them, I will get a penalty. Therefore, I always try to finish my work on time.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议用简洁的句子说明方法，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I usually remember important things by setting reminders on my phone. This helps me stay on schedule and not forget tasks.

× I would say I'm not good at memorizing a thing because I am quite easy to forget something and I didn't realizing it's in a good way to help you to finish your job.

✓ I would say I'm not good at memorizing things because I am quite easy to forget something and I didn't realize it's a good way to help you finish your job.

这里的错误是动词形式使用不当，“didn't realizing”应改为“didn't realize”，因为助动词did后面应接动词原形。建议注意助动词后动词形式的正确使用。

× I would say I'm not good at memorizing a thing because I am quite easy to forget something and I didn't realizing it's in a good way to help you to finish your job.

✓ I would say I'm not good at memorizing things because I am quite easy to forget things and I didn't realize it's a good way to help you finish your job.

这里“a thing”和“something”用法不当，表达泛指时应使用复数形式“things”。建议区分可数名词单复数的使用。

× I would say I'm not good at memorizing a thing because I am quite easy to forget something and I didn't realizing it's in a good way to help you to finish your job.

✓ I would say I'm not good at memorizing things because I am quite easy to forget things and I didn't realize it's a good way to help you finish your job.

句中“to help you to finish”中“to”可以省略，英语中动词不定式中第二个“to”通常省略。建议学习动词不定式的正确用法。

× Maybe you can remember the worst thing you you study I think.

✓ Maybe you can remember the worst thing you studied, I think.

句子结构混乱，缺少标点且时态不一致，应将“study”改为过去式“studied”，并加逗号分隔。建议注意句子结构和时态一致性。

× I'm sure as as I mentioned I am quite often to forget some things and for example I I always forget my PE and left in my house so I need to maybe call my dad or my mom to open the door for me.

✓ I'm sure, as I mentioned, I quite often forget some things. For example, I always forget my PE kit and leave it at home, so I sometimes need to call my dad or my mom to open the door for me.

“quite often”位置不当，应放在动词前；“left in my house”表达不准确，应为“leave it at home”。建议注意副词位置和介词短语的正确使用。

× I'm sure as as I mentioned I am quite often to forget some things and for example I I always forget my PE and left in my house so I need to maybe call my dad or my mom to open the door for me.

✓ I'm sure, as I mentioned, I quite often forget some things. For example, I always forget my PE kit and leave it at home, so I sometimes need to call my dad or my mom to open the door for me.

“my PE”应具体指“my PE kit”，因为PE本身是不可数名词，需用具体名词表达。建议注意名词的具体化和复数形式。

× I think one of the important things I need to remember is during the assignment in the due date, if I don't really finish the assignment in my building, I think I will get a penalty.

✓ I think one of the important things I need to remember is the assignment's due date. If I don't finish the assignment on time, I think I will get a penalty.

“during the assignment in the due date”表达不正确，应为“the assignment's due date”；“in my building”应为“on time”。建议学习时间和地点介词的正确用法。

× I think one of the important things I need to remember is during the assignment in the due date, if I don't really finish the assignment in my building, I think I will get a penalty.

✓ I think one of the important things I need to remember is the assignment's due date. If I don't finish the assignment on time, I think I will get a penalty.

“get a penalty in there”表达不自然，应为“get a penalty”。建议注意介词的正确搭配。

× Actually, one of the useful way to remember or memorizing the useful thing is maybe take a some look at in your phone and or maybe you're setting a clock to remind you that time you need to do something you you plan to do.

✓ Actually, one useful way to remember or memorize useful things is maybe to take a look at your phone or maybe set a clock to remind you of the time you need to do something you plan to do.

“one of the useful way”应为“one useful way”；“take a some look”错误，正确为“take a look”；“setting a clock”应为“set a clock”；“remind you that time”应为“remind you of the time”。建议注意量词和固定搭配的正确使用。