记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, avoiding repeated phrases. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things, especially when it comes to important dates like exams or birthdays of close family members.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Make sure to complete your sentences and provide clear supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I once forgot my girlfriend's birthday, which made her very upset. Additionally, I missed her birthday party, which worsened the situation.

建议: Your answer is fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to work hard so that I can take care of my parents, achieve financial success, and maintain my religious beliefs.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to improve flow.

示例: I usually set calendar reminders for important tasks, so even if I forget, the alerts help me remember deadlines and special days.

× I'm actually very good at memorizing things, specifically if it is required for my exams or if it is someone related to someone that I that is really close to my heart regarding their favorite days or birthdays.

✓ I'm actually very good at memorizing things, specifically if they are required for my exams or if they are related to someone who is really close to my heart regarding their special days or birthdays.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it is' when referring to plural 'things' and has unclear pronoun references. 'Things' is plural, so 'they are' should be used instead of 'it is'. Also, 'someone related to someone that I that is really close to my heart' is confusing and ungrammatical; it should be rephrased to 'they are related to someone who is really close to my heart'. This improves clarity and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I remember this incident vividly as recently I forgot my girlfriend's birthday and she was very furious at me.

✓ Yes, I remember this incident vividly as recently I forgot my girlfriend's birthday and she was very furious with me.

The sentence is mostly correct in tense usage. However, 'furious at me' is less common than 'furious with me' in Canadian English. The past tense 'forgot' is correctly used here to describe a completed action in the past.

× In addition to that, I also forgot to. Through her party.

✓ In addition to that, I also forgot to attend her party.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. 'Forgot to.' is an incomplete verb phrase and 'Through her party.' is a fragment. The corrected sentence combines these fragments into a complete sentence with proper verb usage: 'forgot to attend her party'.

× The most important thing that I remember in my daily life is. I need to work as hard as possible to take care of my parents and succeed financially while being religious.

✓ The most important thing that I remember in my daily life is that I need to work as hard as possible to take care of my parents and succeed financially while being religious.

The original sentence incorrectly ends the first sentence with a period after 'is', creating a sentence fragment. The correction connects the two parts with 'that' to form a complete sentence.

× For most of the important things, I do set up a calendar reminder in that.

✓ For most of the important things, I do set up a calendar reminder for that.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate purpose or reference is 'for'. 'Set up a calendar reminder for that' is the proper phrase.

× So in that case, even if I forget something, I would be reminded by the reminders that I've set and I won't miss the deadline or miss out on the day.

✓ So in that case, even if I forget something, I will be reminded by the reminders that I've set and I won't miss the deadline or miss out on the day.

The use of 'would' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a real future possibility, not a hypothetical one. 'Will' is the correct modal verb to express future certainty or strong likelihood.