记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trực tiếp, nhưng có một lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và thiếu một từ trong câu "use my to recall" khiến câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý hoàn chỉnh câu và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially numbers or small details. Because of this, I usually write things down or use my phone to recall important information, which helps me remember well.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có ví dụ cụ thể, nhưng có lỗi lặp từ "since since" và từ "obsessed" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng từ đúng nghĩa và tránh lỗi lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my friend's birthday, which made her quite upset and disappointed with me. Since then, I always make sure to write important things in my calendar so I don't forget them again.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn bằng cách tránh dùng cụm từ "so therefore" vì nó hơi thừa và làm câu dài hơn cần thiết.

示例: Actually, the most important thing I need to remember every day is to pick up my bags because they contain essential items for my job such as my laptop and documents. If I forget them, it would be really difficult to complete my work efficiently, so I always make sure to double check.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời rõ ràng và có thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ, nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như "writing things down make" nên là "makes" và nên tránh dùng từ thừa như "Uh" để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: I usually remember important things by writing them down on paper. Sometimes I also save information on my phone because it helps me keep track of everything easily. However, writing things down makes it easier for me to remember because I can review the notes whenever I need.

× I usually write things down or use my to recall important information, which helps me remember well.

✓ I usually write things down or use my phone to recall important information, which helps me remember well.

The sentence is missing the object after 'use my'. It should specify what is used to recall information, such as 'phone'. This omission causes confusion and is a pronoun usage error.

× which made her quite obsessed and disappointed with me since since then, I always make sure to write important things in my calendar so I don't forget them again.

✓ which made her quite upset and disappointed with me. Since then, I always make sure to write important things in my calendar so I don't forget them again.

The word 'obsessed' is incorrectly used here; the correct adjective is 'upset' to express negative feelings. Also, 'since since' is a repetition error. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper adjective use.

× Actually, the most important thing I need to remember every day is to pick up my bags.

✓ Actually, the most important thing I need to remember every day is to bring my bags.

The phrase 'pick up my bags' implies collecting bags from somewhere, but the intended meaning is to remember to take them along. 'Bring my bags' is the correct expression here.

× If I forget them, it would be really difficult to complete my work efficiently, so therefore I always make sure to double check.

✓ If I forget them, it would be really difficult to complete my work efficiently; therefore, I always make sure to double check.

Using both 'so' and 'therefore' together is redundant. Also, a semicolon before 'therefore' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Uh, but writing things down make it easier for me to remember because I can review the note whenever I need.

✓ Uh, but writing things down makes it easier for me to remember because I can review the note whenever I need.

The subject 'writing things down' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number.