记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“good memories”应为“good memory”，“forgot”应为“forget”，句子结构不完整。建议你在回答时注意时态一致，句子完整，并且避免重复表达。可以尝试用简单清晰的句子表达自己的观点。

示例: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget important items like my phone and keys. I also find it difficult to remember people's names and faces.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“homemate is remind me”应为“housemate reminded me”。建议你在回答时注意时态和主谓一致，句子要连贯完整。同时，避免重复表达“forgot something important”。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot about an important exam, but fortunately, my housemate reminded me and I was able to attend it.

建议: 你的回答语法混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议你练习用完整的句子回答问题，注意语序和时态，避免使用不正确的结构。可以先给出主题句，然后用具体细节支持。

示例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as the knowledge I learn from my classes and the plans I have to complete each day.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“led him to recall me”应为“ask them to remind me”。建议你使用连贯的句子，注意时态和主谓一致，避免断句过短。

示例: To remember important things, I usually make notes and set alarms. I also tell my friends and ask them to remind me if I forget something.

× No, I can't say I have a good memories because I often forget something important.

✓ No, I can't say I have good memories because I often forget something important.

“memories”前面不需要加不定冠词“a”，因为“memories”是复数名词，不能用“a”修饰。应去掉“a”。

× Such as I always forgot where my phones and my keys places.

✓ For example, I always forget where my phone and my keys are placed.

“forgot”是过去式，但句子表达的是经常发生的事情，应使用一般现在时“forget”。“phones”应为单数“phone”，因为通常指一个手机。动词“places”用法错误，应改为“are placed”表示位置。

× And I am struggling with, remember the name and face?

✓ And I am struggling with remembering names and faces.

“struggling with”后应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形“remember”。“name and face”应使用复数形式“names and faces”，因为通常是多个名字和面孔。

× Definitely, yes. I forgot something important.

✓ Definitely, yes. I have forgotten something important.

这里表达的是过去发生且对现在有影响的事情，应该用现在完成时“have forgotten”，而不是简单过去时“forgot”。

× Fortunately, my homemate is remind me and I get to the exam.

✓ Fortunately, my homemate reminded me and I got to the exam.

“is remind me”结构错误，应使用过去式“reminded”。“get to the exam”应使用过去式“got”，与前文时态一致。

× There are a lot of things. Need I to remember such as the knowledge from I learn from the classes or the plan, what I? Need to do?

✓ There are a lot of things I need to remember, such as the knowledge I learn from classes or the plans I need to do.

句子结构混乱，应将“Need I to remember”改为“I need to remember”，去掉多余的“to”。“from I learn”应改为“I learn”。“plan, what I? Need to do?”应改为“plans I need to do”。

× For some important things, I would. Make some notes and alarms to remind me.

✓ For some important things, I would make some notes and set alarms to remind me.

“would”后不应断句，且“make some notes and alarms”表达不完整，应加“set alarms”表示设置闹钟。

× And I always tell my. Friends and led him to recall me if I forgot.

✓ And I always tell my friends and ask them to remind me if I forget.

“my. Friends”中间不应有句号，应为“my friends”。“led him to recall me”表达错误，应为“ask them to remind me”。“if I forgot”应为一般现在时“if I forget”，表示条件句。