记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有點冗長且語法錯誤，建議用更自然且簡潔的句子來表達你的記憶能力，並避免重複。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, my mom asked me to remember tasks, so I had to repeat them several times to avoid forgetting.

建议: 回答中語法和用詞不夠自然，建議用更正式且清楚的語句描述事件，並避免口語化的表達。

示例: Yes, once during my first year at university, I forgot to attend my midterm exam because I was unwell. Unfortunately, I couldn't retake it.

建议: 回答不夠清晰且語法錯誤，建議用簡單明瞭的句子表達日常需要記得的事情，並避免模糊的詞彙。

示例: In my daily life, I try to remember to be happy and grateful for what I have, because many people forget to appreciate their blessings.

建议: 回答內容不錯，但語句結構和連接詞使用可以更流暢，建議加強句子連貫性。

示例: I use tools like reminders and to-do lists on my phone, which I check frequently. Also, I rely on my calendar app because technology helps me stay organized.

× I would say I'm really bad and terrible at memorizing things because I still remember that.

✓ I would say I'm really bad and terrible at memorizing things because I still don't remember that.

The original sentence uses 'still remember' which contradicts the intended meaning of being bad at memorizing. The correct verb tense and negation should be 'still don't remember' to express inability to remember. This is a present tense issue (ID 6).

× When I was a child my mom asked me to remember something and I keep kept repeating to prevent forgetting.

✓ When I was a child my mom asked me to remember something and I kept repeating it to prevent forgetting.

The phrase 'keep kept' is incorrect; the past tense 'kept' should be used alone. Also, 'repeating' should be followed by an object 'it' for clarity. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× It's a really horrible story. Happens when I was in a freshman.

✓ It's a really horrible story. It happened when I was a freshman.

The sentence 'Happens when I was in a freshman' lacks a subject and uses incorrect tense. It should be 'It happened when I was a freshman' to be grammatically correct. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× I forgot to take my mid exam because I was too drunk and I didn't get a chance to take the exam again.

✓ I forgot to take my midterm exam because I was too drunk and I didn't get a chance to take the exam again.

The phrase 'mid exam' is better expressed as 'midterm exam' for clarity. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and word choice improvement.

× In a very sensational way I think is remember to be happy and to be thankful towards everything because I think people tend to forget that we do have a lot of things and that makes us unhappy.

✓ In a very simple way, I think it is important to remember to be happy and to be thankful for everything because I think people tend to forget that we have a lot of things and that makes us unhappy.

The original sentence is awkward and lacks a clear subject in 'I think is remember'. Adding 'it is important' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'thankful towards' should be 'thankful for'. This involves sentence structure errors (ID 26) and incorrect preposition use (ID 11).

× ...to be thankful towards everything...

✓ ...to be thankful for everything...

The correct preposition to use with 'thankful' is 'for', not 'towards'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× So I think to to be thankful is really.

✓ So I think being thankful is really important.

The phrase 'to to be thankful is really' is incomplete and contains repetition. It should be rephrased to 'being thankful is really important' for clarity and correctness. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).

× I will use tools like a reminder or To Do List in my phone so that I can check out many times and that really helps a lot.

✓ I will use tools like a reminder or a to-do list on my phone so that I can check them many times and that really helps a lot.

The phrase 'To Do List' should be 'a to-do list' with an article and hyphens. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Check out many times' is better as 'check them many times' for clarity. This involves article errors (ID 22) and incorrect prepositions (ID 11).

× Also calendar it's I think it's the best way to use technology.

✓ Also, the calendar; I think it's the best way to use technology.

The sentence is awkward and missing articles and punctuation. Adding 'the' before 'calendar' and proper punctuation improves clarity. This is an article error (ID 22) and sentence structure error (ID 26).