记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct response with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentence structures to express your ability to memorize.

示例: I am not very good at memorising things, but I can remember some important information if I focus carefully.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Provide a clear example with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to explain the situation logically.

示例: Yes, once when I joined a new class, I forgot where I put my important documents, which made me worried.

建议: Your answer has some good points but needs better grammar and coherence. Use linking words and correct sentence forms to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my phone and alarm. Also, I write notes to help me remember important tasks.

建议: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct answer with supporting details using linking words for coherence.

示例: I usually use notebooks to write down important information, and sometimes I use my phone reminders to help me remember.

× Perhaps I'm not memorized person at all, but some things might be memorized but not good at memorizing in my case.

✓ Perhaps I'm not a memorizing person at all, but some things might be memorized; however, I'm not good at memorizing in my case.

The word 'memorized' is a past participle and incorrectly used as an adjective here. The correct adjective form is 'memorizing' to describe a person's ability. Also, the sentence needs an article 'a' before 'memorizing person' and better conjunction for clarity.

× Yes, when I admit mentors and I joined the class and unfortunately I forgot where I put.

✓ Yes, when I met mentors and joined the class, unfortunately, I forgot where I put it.

The verb 'admit' is incorrect in this context; the correct past tense verb is 'met'. Also, the sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'put'. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× Yes, when I admit mentors and I joined the class and unfortunately I forgot where I put.

✓ Yes, when I met mentors and joined the class, unfortunately, I forgot where I put it.

The sentence lacks the pronoun 'it' to indicate the object that was forgotten. Including 'it' clarifies the meaning.

× Obviously it's my phone, it's my alarm, I said everything in note and when I need then it help me to remember in my daily life.

✓ Obviously, it's my phone and my alarm. I write everything in notes, and when I need them, they help me remember in my daily life.

The sentence has pronoun agreement issues: 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'phone and alarm'. Also, 'said' is incorrect; 'write' fits better. 'Note' should be plural 'notes'. Verb agreement corrected to 'help' to 'help me'.

× Obviously it's my phone, it's my alarm, I said everything in note and when I need then it help me to remember in my daily life.

✓ Obviously, it's my phone and my alarm. I write everything in notes, and when I need them, they help me remember in my daily life.

Pronouns must agree in number with their antecedents. 'It' is singular but refers to multiple items; 'them' is correct. Also, verb 'help' should be 'help' (plural) to agree with 'them'.

× Frequently I learned with notebooks and other thing is not my phone and that that brings me to help me to remember.

✓ Frequently, I learn with notebooks, and another thing is my phone, which helps me remember.

'Learned' is past tense but context suggests present habitual action, so 'learn' is correct. 'Other thing is not my phone' is unclear; corrected to 'another thing is my phone'. Also, 'that that brings me to help me to remember' is awkward; simplified to 'which helps me remember'.