记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为简短且有些语法错误，如“a poetry”应为“poetry”，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember the lyrics of my favourite songs and some poems, which helps me enjoy music and literature more deeply.

建议: 回答中存在重复使用“remember”，句子结构不够清晰，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I once forgot to participate in an important competition during high school, which could have helped my future studies. I really regret missing that opportunity.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“we should when should I pay the bill”不合逻辑，建议简化句子并使用正确的语法结构。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as deadlines for submitting homework and when to pay my rent bills to avoid any problems.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“check if I complete the meantime”和“satis satisfied”，建议使用更准确的表达并注意拼写。

示例: Usually, I remember important tasks by making a to-do list and checking off each item once it's done. This method helps me stay organized and gives me a sense of satisfaction.

× For example, it's easy for me to memorize a poetry or the lyric of a song.

✓ For example, it's easy for me to memorize a poem or the lyrics of a song.

“poetry”是不可数名词，不能用不定冠词“a”，应改为可数名词“poem”；“lyric”通常指歌词的单数形式，常用复数“lyrics”表示一首歌的全部歌词。

× Yes, I remember it happened when I was in high school and I remembered a very important competition which can be useful for my further studies and I really regret about forgetting it.

✓ Yes, I remember it happened when I was in high school and I remembered a very important competition which could be useful for my further studies and I really regret forgetting it.

“can”表示现在或将来能力，描述过去事件应使用过去时态“could”；“regret”后面接动名词时不需要介词“about”，应直接接动名词“forgetting”。

× I need to remember a range of things in my daily life, from my schoolwork to things I need to do in my life.

✓ I need to remember a range of things in my daily life, from my schoolwork to the things I need to do in my life.

“things”前缺少定冠词“the”，表示特指后面提到的事情。

× For example, I should remember when is the time I should submit my homework and also we should when should I pay the bill for my house.

✓ For example, I should remember when the time is to submit my homework and also when I should pay the bill for my house.

句子结构混乱，疑问词“when”后应接陈述句，调整语序使句子通顺。

× Well usually I remember important things by making a list and check if I complete the meantime.

✓ Well, usually I remember important things by making a list and checking if I have completed them in the meantime.

并列动词应保持形式一致，前为动名词“making”，后应为“checking”；“complete”应用完成时态“have completed”；“meantime”用法不当，应改为“in the meantime”；“them”指代前文“important things”。

× And every time I complete 1 task I will just delete it and that makes me feel satis satisfied.

✓ And every time I complete one task, I will just delete it and that makes me feel satisfied.

数字“1”应写为英文单词“one”；“satis satisfied”重复，应去掉“satis”，保留“satisfied”。