记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。意味が伝わりにくいため、簡潔で正確な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"I'm not good at memorising things because I find it boring, but I can remember things related to my studies."のように言い換えると良いです。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it boring, but I can remember study materials quite well.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文が途中で途切れています。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由や具体例を付け加えると良いでしょう。例えば、"Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes, like appointments or deadlines, which made me feel stressed."のように表現してください。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes, such as appointments or deadlines, which caused me some trouble.

建议: 意味が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。質問に対して具体的に答え、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"I need to remember important dates and events related to my family and friends because they are special to me."のように言い換えると良いです。

示例: I need to remember important dates and events related to my family and friends because they are very special to me.

建议: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な方法を明確に述べ、文をつなげる接続詞を使いましょう。例えば、"I usually write important things on paper or say them out loud to help me remember."のように表現してください。

示例: I usually write important things on paper or say them out loud to help me remember.

× No, I'm not good at memory seeing things because I feel boring of it, but I can memory of studying.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorising things because I find it boring, but I can memorise when studying.

The phrase 'memory seeing things' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'memorising'. 'I feel boring of it' is incorrect; it should be 'I find it boring' because 'boring' describes the thing, not the person. Also, 'I can memory of studying' is incorrect; the verb 'memorise' should be used instead of 'memory'.

× Yes, I have sometimes forgotten some things important. So I. Want to? Yup.

✓ Yes, I have sometimes forgotten some important things.

The phrase 'some things important' should be 'some important things' to correctly order the adjective and noun. The sentence 'So I. Want to? Yup.' is incomplete and unclear, so it is omitted for clarity and correctness.

× I want to remember to family and friends of memory because there are many special memory and made me.

✓ I want to remember my family and friends because there are many special memories that have affected me.

The preposition 'to' after 'remember' is incorrect; 'remember' is a transitive verb and does not require 'to'. 'Of memory' is incorrect; it should be omitted or replaced with 'memories'. Also, 'special memory' should be plural 'special memories'. The phrase 'and made me' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'that have affected me' for clarity.

× My way doing it is. Lighting Paper. Or saying sometimes so I can remember first.

✓ My way of doing it is writing on paper or saying things aloud so I can remember them.

The phrase 'My way doing it is.' is incomplete; it should be 'My way of doing it is'. 'Lighting Paper' is incorrect; it should be 'writing on paper'. 'Or saying sometimes' is unclear; it is corrected to 'or saying things aloud'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.