记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答比较自然，但句子结构有些复杂且有语法错误，比如“where is my dress”应为“where my dress is”。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I think I am good at memorising facts from textbooks. However, when it comes to everyday things, my memory is not very good. For example, I often forget where I put my clothes.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够清晰，句子过长且缺少连接词。建议分句表达，使用连接词如“because”或“so”，并注意时态和语法的正确性。

示例: Yes, I have. If I remember correctly, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt very guilty, so I bought her a bunch of flowers to apologize.

建议: 回答内容具体，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议使用连接词如“and”或“also”，并注意名词复数和冠词的使用，使表达更准确。

示例: Firstly, I need to remember the deadlines for assignments in my major subjects so that I can finish them on time. Also, I have to complete my work to-do list to submit my tasks.

建议: 回答较为完整且连贯，但“really remember”表达不够自然。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当分句，使语句更流畅。

示例: I remember important things by writing them down in my mobile memo because it is very convenient. I can check it anytime and anywhere. Also, I often set alarms to remind me of tasks I need to finish.

× For example, I often forget where is my dress.

✓ For example, I often forget where my dress is.

In English, when using indirect questions like 'where my dress is', the word order should be subject + verb, not verb + subject. The original sentence incorrectly uses the direct question word order 'where is my dress'.

× Yes I have if I remember correctly once I've got my best friend's birthday which made me feel quite guilty so I bought a bunch of flowers for her to apologize.

✓ Yes, I have. If I remember correctly, once I forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel quite guilty, so I bought a bunch of flowers for her to apologize.

The sentence has tense errors and missing punctuation. 'I've got' is present perfect, but the context requires past tense 'forgot'. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity. The corrected sentence uses past tense to describe a past event.

× Firstly I need to remember the deadlines of each major subjects assignments so I can finish them in time and also I need to remember finishing the To Do List in my work so I can submit the job.

✓ Firstly, I need to remember the deadlines of each major subject's assignments so I can finish them on time, and also I need to remember to finish the To Do List at my work so I can submit the job.

The phrase 'deadlines of each major subjects assignments' is incorrect; it should be 'each major subject's assignments' to show possession and singular form. Also, 'remember finishing' should be 'remember to finish' because 'remember' is followed by the infinitive when referring to future actions. 'In my work' is better as 'at my work' to indicate location. Commas improve sentence clarity.

× Firstly I need to remember the deadlines of each major subjects assignments so I can finish them in time and also I need to remember finishing the To Do List in my work so I can submit the job.

✓ Firstly, I need to remember the deadlines of each major subject's assignments so I can finish them on time, and also I need to remember to finish the To Do List at my work so I can submit the job.

After 'remember', when referring to future actions, the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to finish' rather than the gerund 'finishing'. Using 'remember finishing' implies recalling a past action, which is not the intended meaning here.

× I really remember important things by writing them down on my mobile memo because it's so convenient that I can check it anytime, anywhere, and also I often set alarms to remind me of the things I should finish.

✓ I really remember important things by writing them down in my mobile memo because it's so convenient that I can check it anytime, anywhere, and also I often set alarms to remind me of the things I should finish.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to writing in a memo or notebook; the correct preposition is 'in'. This is because the memo is considered a container for the notes.