记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and a bit lengthy. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, during my childhood, I focused more on exploring subjects rather than memorising them, which is why I did well in math but struggled with subjects like Bengali and history.

建议: Your answer is natural but can be improved by using clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid repeating similar phrases and keep the answer concise.

示例: Yes, I often forget small things because I am quite laid back. However, since I am aware of this, I make an effort to remember important matters carefully, so I rarely forget them.

建议: Your answer is a bit vague and slightly confusing. Try to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: In my daily life, besides routine activities like eating and sleeping, I need to remember my daily schedule. This helps me keep track of what I have accomplished throughout the day.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent and natural.

示例: To remember important things, I usually write them down in my calendar. Additionally, I set alarms on my phone to remind me at the right time.

× I'm not that good at memorizing things from my childhood.

✓ I was not that good at memorizing things during my childhood.

The sentence refers to a past time period ('childhood'), so the verb tense should be in the past ('was not') instead of present ('I'm not'). This maintains consistency in tense usage.

× I was more often exploring it than memorizing it at studies, so I always got good grades in math and bad at Bengali or history.

✓ I was more often exploring it than memorizing it during my studies, so I always got good grades in math but bad grades in Bengali or history.

The phrase 'at studies' is incorrect; 'during my studies' is the proper prepositional phrase. Also, to contrast grades, 'but bad grades' is clearer. The past tense 'was' and 'got' are correct here.

× Well, I always have been in quite laid back kind of a guy, so I forget about small things on a daily basis.

✓ Well, I have always been quite a laid-back kind of guy, so I forget small things on a daily basis.

The correct word order is 'have always been' for present perfect continuous tense. 'Laid back' should be hyphenated as 'laid-back' when used as an adjective. Also, 'forget about small things' is better as 'forget small things'.

× I generally tend to take note of my important things and stick it to the calendar, and other than that I tend to set an alarm on my phone for remembering the important thing.

✓ I generally tend to take note of my important things and stick them on the calendar, and other than that I tend to set an alarm on my phone to remember important things.

The phrase 'stick it to the calendar' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'stick them on the calendar' because 'things' is plural. Also, 'for remembering' should be 'to remember' to express purpose.