记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memories rising things”应为“memorising things”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的词汇表达，并简洁明了地回答问题。

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it difficult to remember abstract concepts. For example, when I was in high school, I struggled to memorise abstract ideas in my art textbooks, which affected my studies.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，逻辑不清晰。建议练习句子结构，避免重复和冗余，使用连词使表达更连贯。

示例: Definitely yes. Sometimes when I plan to search for important information online, I get distracted by trivial things on my phone, which causes me to forget what I originally wanted to do.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“in the in the Sundays”，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时间表达。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things such as my plans for the week and deadlines, like the submission date for a course assignment, which is very important for me.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“make a plans”，建议注意单复数一致，句子应更简洁流畅，使用连接词增强逻辑性。

示例: To remember important things, I usually make plans on my phone. This helps me stay organized, and I try to complete tasks immediately, which is very helpful for me.

× I'm not good at memories rising things because I think it's very hard to remember those things.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things because I think it's very hard to remember those things.

这里'memories rising'是错误的动名词形式，正确的动名词是'memorising'，表示记忆的动作。

× although I'm a student majoring in art, I usually find it very difficult for me to memorize those abstract memes in the textbook, so that will be very bad for me.

✓ although I'm a student majoring in art, I usually find it very difficult to memorize those abstract memes in the textbook, so that is very bad for me.

句中'will be'时态不符合上下文，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时'is'。

× I usually forget something important when I had to do it.

✓ I usually forget something important when I have to do it.

句中时态不一致，'usually'表示习惯动作，应使用一般现在时'have'而非过去时'had'。

× when I want to search something important is in the Internet.

✓ when I want to search for something important on the Internet.

动词'search'后应接介词'for'，表示搜索某物；'in the Internet'应改为'on the Internet'，符合固定搭配。

× when I opened my forms, I would like to search something trivial things in the app that will help me contribute to me forget the importance that I would like to do.

✓ when I open my phone, I tend to search for trivial things in apps that cause me to forget the important things I want to do.

时态应统一为一般现在时，'would like to'用法不当，且表达不清晰，需调整句子结构。

× I would like to remember those important things, for example, the plans that I would like to accomplish these days and the deadline that I would like to accomplish in the in the Sundays, for example, the deadline of a course that will be very beneficial for me.

✓ I want to remember important things, for example, the plans I want to accomplish these days and the deadlines I want to meet on Sundays, such as the deadline of a course which is very important to me.

'would like to'表达愿望不当，且'deadline'不可用'accomplish'，应使用'meet'或'complete'。

× Make a plans can usually to some degree help me to remember those important things.

✓ Making plans can usually help me to some degree remember those important things.

'a plans'中'a'与复数'noun'不匹配，应去掉'a'或改为单数形式。

× Make a plans can usually to some degree help me to remember those important things.

✓ Making plans can usually help me to some degree remember those important things.

句首应使用动名词'Making'作为主语，而非动词原形'Make'。

× When I attend to my plans on my phone, I would like to do it immediately and accomplish it well.

✓ When I attend to my plans on my phone, I try to do them immediately and accomplish them well.

'would like to'用法不当，表达习惯动作应使用一般现在时，且代词需与复数'plans'一致。