记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇。

示例: Not really. I often forget where my kids are. Also, I sometimes forget paragraphs from my textbook, and occasionally I forget places I want to visit.

建议: 回答较为完整，但有重复和语气词，建议减少语气词，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, last year I forgot the date of my final exam until the day before. I also forgot the time and place until my classmates reminded me, which was very stressful.

建议: 表达重复且不够具体，建议使用连接词丰富内容，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my daily routine, tasks to complete before sleeping, and the timing of important events.

建议: 表达较清晰，但句子结构不够自然，建议调整句子顺序，使用更地道的表达方式。

示例: I usually write important things on paper and place it on my desk. When I'm outside, I use my phone's To Do List app or reminders to keep track.

× I often forget where my kids are and also I can't reveal the textbook, the paragraph on the textbook.

✓ I often forget where my kids are and also I can't remember the paragraph in the textbook.

这里'reveal the textbook'用词不当，应该用'remember'表示记住，且介词'on the textbook'应改为'in the textbook'，因为段落是在书本里面。

× Very preciously than as my classmates also I forgot the place I want to go sometimes.

✓ More precisely than my classmates, I also sometimes forget the place I want to go.

'Very preciously than as'结构错误，应该用比较级'more precisely than'，且句子结构混乱，调整语序使句子通顺。

× I forgot the date of my final exam until the day before the exam.

✓ I didn't remember the date of my final exam until the day before the exam.

这里用'forgot'不太合适，表达持续忘记直到某时，应该用过去时的否定形式'didn't remember'更准确。

× I forgot when and where to take the exam until my classmates told me it was terrible.

✓ I didn't know when and where to take the exam until my classmates told me; it was terrible.

'forgot'用法不当，应该用'didn't know'表示不知道考试时间和地点，且句子需要分号连接两个独立分句。

× At first I need to remember what to do in today daily routine.

✓ First, I need to remember what to do in today's daily routine.

'At first'用法不当，改为'First'更自然；'today daily routine'缺少所有格，应为'today's daily routine'。

× I simply write it down on the paper and put the paper on the table which I used most often on.

✓ I simply write it down on paper and put the paper on the table which I use most often.

'on the paper'改为'on paper'更自然；'which I used most often on'中介词'on'多余，且时态应为现在时'use'。

× But when I'm outside there is no table I need to write record.

✓ But when I'm outside, there is no table, so I need to record it.

句子缺少逗号，且'write record'表达不正确，应改为'record it'。

× It's important things on my phone like the To Do List app or the reminders in the clock.

✓ I record important things on my phone, like the To Do List app or the reminders on the clock.

'It's important things'语法错误，应为'I record important things'；'reminders in the clock'应为'reminders on the clock'。