记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。特に、"I have a lot of, I have don't have a lot of experiences"の部分は意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して直接的に答え、簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

示例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things because I haven't had many opportunities to practice it, such as preparing for school entrance exams.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、内容が曖昧で繰り返しが多いです。具体的な例を明確に述べ、冗長な表現を避けましょう。

示例: Yes, I have. For example, once I forgot to go to my part-time job because I was very busy and distracted.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な内容を含めて簡潔に述べることが重要です。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks, such as appointments and deadlines, to stay organized.

建议: 回答は比較的明確ですが、繰り返しや文法の誤りがあります。より自然な表現を使い、簡潔にまとめましょう。

示例: I usually record my tasks on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can easily check my to-do list anytime.

× I have a lot of, I have don't have a lot of experiences to memorize things because I have not experienced the test to enter schools.

✓ I don't have a lot of experience memorizing things because I have not taken the test to enter schools.

The phrase 'a lot of experiences' is incorrect here; 'experience' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Also, the sentence structure was confusing with 'I have a lot of, I have don't have a lot of'. The corrected sentence uses 'experience' in singular form and clarifies the meaning.

× Sometimes I've forgotten some things.

✓ Sometimes I forget some things.

The present perfect tense 'I've forgotten' is not appropriate here because the sentence refers to habitual actions. The simple present tense 'I forget' is better to express repeated or habitual forgetting.

× One of these things is that I have forgotten my part time job.

✓ One of these things is that I forgot my part-time job.

The phrase 'my part time job' should be hyphenated as 'part-time job'. Also, 'have forgotten' is present perfect, but the context suggests a specific past event, so simple past 'forgot' is more appropriate.

× I think I have.

✓ I think I do.

The sentence 'I think I have' is incomplete and unclear. The verb 'have' needs an object or complement. Since the question is about what the student needs to remember, 'I think I do' (meaning 'I think I need to remember') is clearer.

× I often take my phones so so wherever I can check my task on my phone.

✓ I often take my phone so that wherever I am, I can check my tasks on my phone.

The plural 'phones' is incorrect; it should be singular 'phone'. The phrase 'so so wherever' is incorrect; it should be 'so that wherever'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks.