记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use plural forms correctly and provide a clear, concise response with specific examples. For instance, instead of saying 'memorize thing of my work,' say 'I usually memorize the tasks I need to complete at work.'

示例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, I usually remember the tasks I need to complete at work and the steps I should follow next.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise grammar and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid double negatives like 'Not every time.' Instead, say 'I rarely forget important things because...'.

示例: I rarely forget important things because I write notes or mark important dates on my phone calendar to help me remember.

建议: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'for example' effectively and ensure subject-verb agreement, such as 'so it keeps in mind.' Try to be more specific and concise.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks, such as upcoming assignment due dates. For example, I write them down in my notes to keep them in mind.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. For instance, explain how writing tasks and setting reminders help you remember important things.

示例: I usually remember important things by writing tasks in my notebook and marking deadlines on my phone calendar. For example, if I need to take medicine, I set an alarm as a reminder.

× I usually umm, memorize thing of my work, what I need to do next and another things.

✓ I usually umm, memorize things related to my work, what I need to do next, and other things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context of multiple items. Also, 'another things' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns; it should be 'other things'. This correction ensures proper singular/plural agreement and correct use of quantifiers.

× Not every time because if something important coming up I just write down notes or circle the dates in my phone so I can remember the important things.

✓ Not every time because if something important comes up, I just write down notes or circle the dates in my phone so I can remember the important things.

The phrase 'something important coming up' lacks the auxiliary verb 'comes' to form the present simple tense. The correct form is 'something important comes up' to indicate a habitual action in the present.

× Well, I need to remember in my daily life that, uh, what's the upcoming important task in my whole day?

✓ Well, I need to remember in my daily life what the upcoming important tasks are for my whole day.

The phrase 'remember in my daily life that, uh, what's' is awkward and incorrect. The preposition 'in' is acceptable, but the sentence structure needs adjustment for clarity. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks in a day.

× For example, I need to remember my upcoming due dates of assignments.

✓ For example, I need to remember my upcoming due dates for assignments.

The phrase 'due dates of assignments' is acceptable, but 'due dates for assignments' is more natural. No plural issue here, but preposition correction improves clarity.

× So I just write down on my notes so it keep in mind.

✓ So I just write it down in my notes so I keep it in mind.

The phrase 'so it keep in mind' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the subject 'I' and be 'keep'. Also, 'write down on my notes' should be 'write it down in my notes' for correct preposition and object usage.

× Well, I usually remember important things, uh, when I write down task on my notebook or some important deadlines to mark down on my phone calendar.

✓ Well, I usually remember important things when I write down tasks in my notebook or mark important deadlines on my phone calendar.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Also, 'write down task on my notebook' should be 'write down tasks in my notebook' for correct plural and preposition usage.

× And for example, I, if I had, if I need to take any medicine, I just make.

✓ For example, if I need to take any medicine, I just make a note of it.

The original sentence is incomplete and confusing. The phrase 'if I had' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow. Completing the sentence with 'make a note of it' clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.