记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言说明原因。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often get migraines, which make it hard for me to concentrate and remember things.

建议: 回答较为直接，但语法和表达有误。建议注意时态和单复数形式，增加细节使回答更具体。

示例: Yes, definitely. For example, I once forgot my closest friend's birthday, which made me feel really bad.

建议: 回答内容较杂乱，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词组织句子，具体说明需要记住的事项。

示例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as my diet, what clothes to wear, the traffic conditions, my study schedule, and the people I have to meet.

建议: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多。建议简化表达，直接说明使用的记忆方法，并举例说明。

示例: I find it hard to remember things, so I usually write notes or use apps on my phone to help me remember important tasks.

× I guess no, I have isomania for decades so I thought it made me feel dizzy everyday which lead to migraine to 'cause my remember heart.

✓ I guess no, I have isomania for decades so I thought it made me feel dizzy every day which led to migraine because of my weak memory.

句中 'lead' 应为过去式 'led'，因为前文使用了过去时态 'thought'，动作发生在过去。'cause' 应改为 'because of' 以表达原因。'remember heart' 语义不清，改为 'weak memory' 更合适。

× I guess no, I have isomania for decades so I thought it made me feel dizzy everyday which lead to migraine to 'cause my remember heart.

✓ I guess no, I have isomania for decades so I thought it made me feel dizzy every day which led to migraine because of my weak memory.

'lead' 应用过去式 'led'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× I guess no, I have isomania for decades so I thought it made me feel dizzy everyday which lead to migraine to 'cause my remember heart.

✓ I guess no, I have isomania for decades so I thought it made me feel dizzy every day which led to migraine because of my weak memory.

'everyday' 应为副词短语 'every day'，表示“每天”，而非形容词 'everyday'。

× Yes, definitely. I think everyone has experienced forgetting something important at least once. The one of mine is I forget my closest friends birthday.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think everyone has experienced forgetting something important at least once. One of mine is that I forgot my closest friend's birthday.

'The one of mine' 应改为 'One of mine'，'forget' 应用过去式 'forgot'，'friends' 应为所有格 'friend's'。

× Yes, definitely. I think everyone has experienced forgetting something important at least once. The one of mine is I forget my closest friends birthday.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think everyone has experienced forgetting something important at least once. One of mine is that I forgot my closest friend's birthday.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式 'forgot'。

× Well, numerous. The diet, the clothes, the traffic condition, the study scheduled today and the people I have to meet today and et cetera. There's so many I can't remember.

✓ Well, numerous. The diet, the clothes, the traffic conditions, the study schedule today, the people I have to meet today, and so on. There are so many I can't remember.

'traffic condition' 应为复数 'traffic conditions'，'study scheduled' 应为 'study schedule'，'There's' 应改为复数形式 'There are'，因为后面指代复数。

× Well, numerous. The diet, the clothes, the traffic condition, the study scheduled today and the people I have to meet today and et cetera. There's so many I can't remember.

✓ Well, numerous. The diet, the clothes, the traffic conditions, the study schedule today, the people I have to meet today, and so on. There are so many I can't remember.

'There's' 是 'There is' 的缩写，后面接复数名词时应使用 'There are'。

× Well, since I have an unintelligible brain which call things to my mind hardly, so I prefer carrying out some measure external such as notes and some applications.

✓ Well, since I have an unintelligible brain which hardly calls things to my mind, I prefer carrying out some external measures such as notes and some applications.

'call things to my mind hardly' 语序错误，应为 'hardly calls things to my mind'。'measure external' 应为 'external measures'，形容词应放在名词前。去掉多余的 'so'。