记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有较多的口头语和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用正确的时态和语法，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, my mother often praises me because I can remember events from when I was just one year old.

建议: 回答较简短且语法错误明显，建议使用完整句子，避免口头语，表达更清晰具体。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. I think it is normal because everyone makes mistakes sometimes.

建议: 回答中信息混乱且有明显错误（如年龄），建议回答时条理清晰，避免错误信息，使用连贯的句子表达具体内容。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to do my homework and wash my hands before meals. Sometimes I forget these small but important tasks.

建议: 回答缺乏结构且含有许多口头语，建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并举例说明记忆方法。

示例: I usually remember important things by making mental notes. Also, my family and friends often remind me if I forget something.

× My mom's always say that I'm really good at memorizing because now I also can umm, memorize that the uh, one years old of my 1 memory now I can also.

✓ My mom always says that I'm really good at memorizing because now I can also, umm, memorize that, uh, my 1-year-old memory.

动词与第三人称单数主语不一致，'mom'是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，故'say'应改为'says'。

× Yeah, of course all the people will forgotten something important that is really, MMM, normal, I think.

✓ Yeah, of course all people will forget something important; that is really, MMM, normal, I think.

'will forgotten'是错误的时态搭配，'will'后应接动词原形，故'forgotten'应改为'forget'。

× Yeah, of course all the people will forgotten something important that is really, MMM, normal, I think.

✓ Yeah, of course all people will forget something important; that is really, MMM, normal, I think.

'all the people'中'the'可省略，且更自然表达为'all people'。

× sometimes I forgot to do my homework that is very normal and wash my hand.

✓ sometimes I forget to do my homework; that is very normal, and wash my hands.

此处描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，'forgot'应改为'forget'。

× sometimes I forgot to do my homework that is very normal and wash my hand.

✓ sometimes I forget to do my homework; that is very normal, and wash my hands.

'wash my hand'中'hand'应为复数形式'hands'，因为通常洗双手。

× Now I am 515 years old but I always forgot wash my hand before dinner.

✓ Now I am 15 years old, but I always forget to wash my hands before dinner.

年龄数字错误，应为'15'而非'515'；'always forgot'应为一般现在时'always forget'；'wash my hand'应为'wash my hands'；'forget wash'应为'forget to wash'。

× Now I am 515 years old but I always forgot wash my hand before dinner.

✓ Now I am 15 years old, but I always forget to wash my hands before dinner.

动词'forget'后应接不定式'to wash'，缺少介词'to'。

× sometimes my friend, my family will, uh, will telling me to remember to do that thing.

✓ sometimes my friend, my family will, uh, tell me to remember to do that thing.

'will'后应接动词原形，'will telling'错误，应改为'will tell'。