记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够清晰和连贯，表达含糊且有重复，建议回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免使用口语填充词。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and facts, although sometimes I forget unpleasant memories quickly.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议先直接回答问题，然后用一两个简洁的句子说明具体情况，注意语法和时态的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I once forgot about an exam that was scheduled for the next day. I stayed up late and couldn't wake up early enough to attend it.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但有重复词汇和表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并避免重复。

示例: As a postgraduate student, I need to remember many tasks, such as conducting experiments, writing papers, and attending courses. Therefore, I usually make a schedule or a to-do list to keep track of my daily responsibilities.

建议: 回答中有很多口语填充词，表达不够清晰完整。建议直接陈述方法，避免重复和不完整的句子。

示例: I usually set reminders on my phone or write important things down on paper. These methods help me remember important tasks effectively.

× Yes, whatever I think I'm good at, you know, memories, some things like even if those bad memories, I can't remember it for a long time, not alone, let alone, you know, the good, those good memories.

✓ Yes, whatever I think I'm good at, you know, memory, some things like even if those bad memories, I can't remember them for a long time, let alone, you know, the good, those good memories.

这里“memories”应改为不可数名词“memory”，表示记忆的能力；“it”应改为“them”，因为指代复数“bad memories”，需要用复数代词。

× Yes, there is a time that I forgot that an exam that which take place in the next day and I just stay up late and can't get up early to you know, get to the exam.

✓ Yes, there was a time that I forgot that an exam would take place the next day and I just stayed up late and couldn't get up early to, you know, get to the exam.

描述过去的事情，动词时态应使用过去时，“is”改为“was”，“take”改为“would take”，“stay”改为“stayed”，“can't”改为“couldn't”。

× For me, as a postgraduate student, I think I have to deal with a lot of things, such as doing some experiments and writing some papers and taking some courses.

✓ For me, as a postgraduate student, I think I have to deal with a lot of things, such as doing some experiments, writing some papers, and taking some courses.

这里是列举多个动作，使用逗号分隔更清晰，且“doing”、“writing”、“taking”保持一致的动名词形式。

× So I have to schedule my daily daily tasks and make a list maybe.

✓ So I have to schedule my daily tasks and maybe make a list.

“daily daily”重复，应去掉一个；“make a list maybe”语序不自然，改为“maybe make a list”更符合英语习惯。

× For me, maybe I make a notification in my my cell phone, the apps I mean, or make some, you know, make a list or write something on papers to help me remember something that is important.

✓ For me, maybe I make a notification on my cell phone, the apps I mean, or make a list or write something on paper to help me remember something that is important.

“in my my cell phone”重复且介词用错，应为“on my cell phone”；“papers”应为不可数名词“paper”，表示纸张。

× Or I would just forget it and.

✓ Or I would just forget it.

句子不完整，结尾“and”后无内容，应去掉“and”使句子完整。