记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and use simpler, correct phrases. For example, instead of "most easiest," say "easiest." Also, try to make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

示例: I am not very good at memorising things. When I was a student, I found it difficult to remember even simple information, which made passing exams challenging.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and repetition. Avoid repeating words like "Once" and use more natural expressions. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and be more specific about the event.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, during university, I once missed an exam, which was very upsetting for me.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and more natural phrases. Instead of repeating "I need to remember," try to combine the ideas and use smoother transitions.

示例: I have to remember many things in my daily life because I am quite busy. For instance, I always make sure to bring my wallet, keys when I ride my bike, and important papers with me.

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be more concise and natural. Avoid informal phrases like "So yeah" and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: I usually write notes on my smartphone to help me remember important things. This method is very convenient and prevents me from forgetting tasks in daily life.

× I really find it hard to memorize even the most easiest information.

✓ I really find it hard to memorize even the easiest information.

The phrase 'most easiest' is incorrect because 'easiest' is already the superlative form of 'easy'. Using 'most' with a superlative adjective is redundant and grammatically wrong. The correct form is 'the easiest'.

× In fact, it was so challenging for me to pass the exams where memorization was much needed skill.

✓ In fact, it was so challenging for me to pass the exams where memorization was a much needed skill.

The phrase 'much needed skill' requires an article before 'much needed skill' because 'skill' is a countable noun here. The correct form is 'a much needed skill'.

× There were many events where I forgot so many vital information.

✓ There were many events where I forgot so much vital information.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be used with 'many'. Instead, 'much' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns like 'information'.

× Once, Once Upon a time when I was in my varsity, I forgot to even attend an exam, which was a devastating event for me.

✓ Once, once upon a time when I was at my varsity, I forgot to even attend an exam, which was a devastating event for me.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to being at a university or college. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location in this context.

× I need to remember things like to bring my wallet, to bring my keys with me as I ride bikes.

✓ I need to remember things like bringing my wallet and my keys with me as I ride my bike.

The phrase 'things like to bring' is incorrect. After 'like', the gerund form ('bringing') should be used. Also, 'ride bikes' is better as 'ride my bike' to indicate personal possession and singular form.

× I also have to remember to bring my papers.

✓ I also have to remember to bring my papers with me.

Adding 'with me' clarifies the action of carrying the papers along, which is more natural in English in this context.

× I usually keep notes on my smartphone, otherwise I don't think I can remember a lot of stuff and it would cause me to suffer in a daily life.

✓ I usually keep notes on my smartphone; otherwise, I don't think I can remember a lot of stuff, and it would cause me to suffer in daily life.

The sentence needs proper punctuation to separate independent clauses. Also, 'in a daily life' is incorrect; it should be 'in daily life' without the article 'a'.