记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法和表达存在错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually write down important tasks or ideas to make sure I don't forget them.

建议: 表达不够流畅，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议使用更简单的句子，明确表达原因和方法。

示例: Yes, sometimes I forget details of long-term tasks. That's why I always keep records in my notebook or phone to avoid missing anything important.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议分句表达，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: I need to remember many things from work and home. For instance, I have to recall meeting details for my reports and also remember the shopping list for my family.

建议: 句子结构混乱，有重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，清晰说明记忆方法和习惯。

示例: Since I'm not good at remembering things, I write down important and urgent tasks in my notebook or phone, and I check them first thing in the morning.

× Memorizing things is a hard work for me, so I have the habit to keep recording of what I thought or what I need to done to avoid anything urgent or important.

✓ Memorizing things is hard work for me, so I have the habit of keeping records of what I thought or what I need to do to avoid anything urgent or important.

“a hard work”中“work”是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”；“keep recording”应改为“keeping records”，因为“record”在此处应为可数名词复数形式；“need to done”应为“need to do”，动词不定式后应接动词原形。

× Memorizing things is a hard work for me, so I have the habit to keep recording of what I thought or what I need to done to avoid anything urgent or important.

✓ Memorizing things is hard work for me, so I have the habit of keeping records of what I thought or what I need to do to avoid anything urgent or important.

“need to done”中“done”是过去分词，动词不定式“to”后应接动词原形“do”。

× so I have the habit to keep recording of what I thought or what I need to done to avoid anything urgent or important.

✓ so I have the habit of keeping records of what I thought or what I need to do to avoid anything urgent or important.

“have the habit to keep”应改为“have the habit of keeping”，习惯后面应接介词“of”加动名词形式。

× If there is a task that will maintain a long period, it will be easy for me to miss something important in detail.

✓ If there is a task that will last a long period, it will be easy for me to miss something important in detail.

“maintain a long period”用词不当，应使用“last a long period”表示持续一段时间。

× So keep the record on the notebook or on the phone is a good way for me to avoid missing anything important or urgent.

✓ So keeping records in the notebook or on the phone is a good way for me to avoid missing anything important or urgent.

“keep the record”应改为动名词形式“keeping records”；“on the notebook”应改为“in the notebook”，因为“notebook”是容器，使用介词“in”。

× So keep the record on the notebook or on the phone is a good way for me to avoid missing anything important or urgent.

✓ So keeping records in the notebook or on the phone is a good way for me to avoid missing anything important or urgent.

“record”应为复数形式“records”，表示多条记录。

× I have to remember lots of things both from workplace and family.

✓ I have to remember lots of things from both the workplace and family.

“both from workplace and family”结构不完整，应改为“from both the workplace and family”，并加上定冠词“the”。

× I have to remember lots of things both from workplace and family.

✓ I have to remember lots of things from both the workplace and family.

“from workplace and family”应改为“from both the workplace and family”，以表达“来自两个方面”。

× For example I need to remember the details of the meeting to have my document on report and also I need to remember the shopping list and to to buy to buy for my family.

✓ For example, I need to remember the details of the meeting to prepare my report document, and also I need to remember the shopping list and what to buy for my family.

“to have my document on report”表达不清，应改为“to prepare my report document”；“to to buy to buy”重复，应删去重复部分；句中缺少逗号。

× For example I need to remember the details of the meeting to have my document on report and also I need to remember the shopping list and to to buy to buy for my family.

✓ For example, I need to remember the details of the meeting to prepare my report document, and also I need to remember the shopping list and what to buy for my family.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词和明确表达，应调整为两个并列分句，表达清晰。

× For me who not who is not good at memory, I have the habit of keeping anything important and urgent on my in my notebooks or on my phone.

✓ For me, who is not good at memory, I have the habit of keeping anything important and urgent in my notebooks or on my phone.

“who not who is not good at memory”重复且语序错误，应改为“who is not good at memory”；“on my in my notebooks”介词重复，应删去“on my”。

× For me who not who is not good at memory, I have the habit of keeping anything important and urgent on my in my notebooks or on my phone.

✓ For me, who is not good at memory, I have the habit of keeping anything important and urgent in my notebooks or on my phone.

“keeping ... on my in my notebooks”中介词使用错误，应使用“in my notebooks”表示在笔记本内。

× Just when I when the moment I get up, I check at first.

✓ Just at the moment I get up, I check first.

“Just when I when the moment I get up”重复且语序错误，应简化为“Just at the moment I get up”；“check at first”应改为“check first”，副词位置调整。