记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、"I am good at remembering things, such as events with my friends and family, and people's names."のように言い換えられます。

示例: Yes, I am good at remembering things, such as events with my friends and family, and people's names.

建议: 文法ミス（"I forgotten"は誤り）や冗長な表現があります。過去形の正しい使い方を学び、簡潔に答えることが大切です。例えば、"Yes, I once forgot the deadline of an assignment, which caused me a lot of trouble."のように表現できます。

示例: Yes, I once forgot the deadline of an assignment, which caused me a lot of trouble.

建议: 回答が繰り返しで冗長になっています。内容を整理し、論理的に繋げるために接続詞を使い、具体的に述べることが必要です。例えば、"I need to remember assignment deadlines and daily tasks. Also, since I am studying English, I try to memorize many new words."のように言い換えられます。

示例: I need to remember assignment deadlines and daily tasks. Also, since I am studying English, I try to memorize many new words.

建议: 文法や語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい文法を使い、具体的な方法を簡潔に説明しましょう。例えば、"I remember important things by making a list on my phone. For example, I add assignments and important appointments to my schedule."のように表現できます。

示例: I remember important things by making a list on my phone. For example, I add assignments and important appointments to my schedule.

× I really remember things, what happens with my friends and also with my families and I Additionally I can remember well the names of people.

✓ I really remember things that happen with my friends and also with my family. Additionally, I can remember the names of people well.

The pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used; it should be 'that' to introduce a relative clause. 'Families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× the most important thing that I forgotten was the deadline of my assignment and I was totally misled and I forgot it.

✓ the most important thing that I forgot was the deadline of my assignment, and I was totally misled and forgot it.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to be correct. Since the sentence is in simple past, 'forgot' is the correct form.

× I remember important things be doing the making a list in my phone for example when I have assignments or important schedule, I put it on my schedule umm up.

✓ I remember important things by making a list on my phone. For example, when I have assignments or an important schedule, I put it on my schedule.

The phrase 'be doing the making' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by' followed by the gerund 'making'. Also, 'on my phone' is the correct preposition for placing a list, and 'an important schedule' requires the article 'an'.