记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'memory thing' và 'when it come to'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và không mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể với các liên từ phù hợp.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially important achievements during my student years. For example, I used different techniques like making notes, which helped me study more effectively.

建议: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng, ví dụ 'I haven't missed' có thể gây hiểu nhầm. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và câu trả lời trực tiếp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời thiếu chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết logic.

示例: Yes, sometimes I get very busy with work or study, so I have missed important appointments, like even my own birthday.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'many thing important things'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many important things, especially my schedule, such as appointments and meetings. Additionally, I try to remember my friends' and family members' birthdays so I can celebrate with them.

建议: Câu trả lời bắt đầu bằng câu hỏi không phù hợp và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm chi tiết để phong phú hơn.

示例: To remember important things, I usually write them down on paper or set reminders on my phone, which helps me make sure I don't forget them.

× Yes, I'm good at memory thing especially when it come to important achievement when I was a student for example I can easily in my study because I use different technique and making notes.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorising things especially when it comes to important achievements when I was a student. For example, I could easily study because I used different techniques and made notes.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'memory thing' should be 'memorising things'; 'come' should be 'comes' (third person singular, but this is covered under subject-verb agreement); 'achievement' should be plural 'achievements'; 'technique' should be plural 'techniques'. Also, verb tenses are adjusted to past to match 'when I was a student'. Suggestions: Use plural forms when referring to multiple items and ensure verb forms agree with their subjects.

× Yes, sometime I'm very busy with work or study so I haven't missed important appointment such as my own birthday.

✓ Yes, sometimes I'm very busy with work or study so I have missed important appointments such as my own birthday.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'haven't missed' (present perfect negative) when the intended meaning is that the person did miss appointments. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency), and 'appointment' should be plural 'appointments'. Modal verb usage and tense are corrected to express past events that happened. Suggestions: Use 'have missed' to indicate past experiences and 'sometimes' for frequency.

× In my daily life I need to remember many thing important things especially my schedule such as appointments and meetings.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember many important things, especially my schedule such as appointments and meetings.

The phrase 'many thing important things' is incorrect; 'thing' should be plural 'things' and 'important' should precede 'things' as an adjective. Suggestions: Use plural nouns with quantifiers like 'many' and place adjectives before nouns.

× I also try to remember my friends and family members birthday so I can celebrate with them.

✓ I also try to remember my friends' and family members' birthdays so I can celebrate with them.

Possessive apostrophes are missing to indicate that the birthdays belong to friends and family members. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' because it refers to multiple people. Suggestions: Use possessive form with apostrophes and pluralize nouns when referring to multiple items.

× What I need to remember Important thing? I usually write them down on paper or set on my phone, which makes sure I don't forget it.

✓ What important things do I need to remember? I usually write them down on paper or set reminders on my phone, which ensures I don't forget them.

The question is incorrectly structured; it should be a proper question with auxiliary verb 'do'. 'Important thing' should be plural 'important things'. 'Set on my phone' is incomplete; 'set reminders on my phone' is clearer. 'Makes sure' should be 'ensures' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'things'. Suggestions: Form questions properly, use plural nouns when appropriate, and ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.