记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
Oh actually yes, since as a Senior High School student we should memorize many much knowledge during the study time. So I am very good at memorizing knowledge or maybe memorizing numbers or some extra knowledge outside the book.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
Oh definitely yes, since I mean an impatient person. So will I need to memorize some important things? I usually prefer to write down on the paper still, but if I don't go outside with the paper I will always forget some important things.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
As a Senior High student in my daily life, I need to memorize some knowledge on books also in order to deal with my my exams in my daily life and also I need to remember some numbers such as phone numbers and delivery numbers.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
And maybe I will write down on papers by pencils or also I would prefer to write them down or type it down on my mobile phones to remind me of some important things. Things maybe. Regardless, I always always carry our phones, so it may be convenient for me.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用更自然的表达方式。
示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because, as a senior high school student, I often need to remember a lot of information for my studies. Besides school knowledge, I also try to memorise numbers and other useful facts.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑连接不够顺畅。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并用连接词使回答更连贯。
示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before because I am quite impatient. Therefore, I usually write important notes on paper. However, if I forget to bring the paper with me, I tend to forget those things.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
示例: In my daily life as a senior high school student, I need to remember knowledge from my textbooks to prepare for exams. Besides that, I also have to remember important numbers like phone numbers and delivery codes.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
示例: I usually write important things down on paper with a pencil, or I type them into my mobile phone. Since I always carry my phone, it is very convenient for me to check reminders anytime.
语法
× since as a Senior High School student we should memorize many much knowledge during the study time.
✓ since as a Senior High School student we should memorize much knowledge during the study time.
“many much”是错误的量词搭配，knowledge是不可数名词，应使用“much”而非“many”。
× I need to memorize some knowledge on books also in order to deal with my my exams in my daily life and also I need to remember some numbers such as phone numbers and delivery numbers.
✓ I need to memorize some knowledge from books also in order to deal with my exams in my daily life and also I need to remember some numbers such as phone numbers and delivery numbers.
“knowledge on books”表达不准确，应该用“knowledge from books”表示“从书本中获得的知识”。
× Regardless, I always always carry our phones, so it may be convenient for me.
✓ Regardless, I always always carry my phone, so it may be convenient for me.
“our phones”指代不明确，且主语是“I”，应使用第一人称单数物主代词“my phone”。
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