记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung phù hợp, nhưng bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và số nhiều trong tiếng Anh, ví dụ như "people's names" thay vì "people's name". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một câu ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I can easily remember the plot and characters of movies I watch, as well as people's names and faces after meeting them once.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách, ví dụ "I once forgot" thay vì "I once forget". Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ như "forget" nhiều lần trong cùng câu. Bạn có thể sử dụng các từ đồng nghĩa hoặc cấu trúc khác để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Oh yes, I once forgot my phone at school. Besides that, I sometimes overlook small tasks like doing my homework or house chores.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, ví dụ "assignments that request allow careful planning" không đúng. Bạn nên sửa lại câu cho rõ nghĩa và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

示例: I need to remember my tests and goals every day to stay organized and meet deadlines. For example, since I often have many assignments, I have to plan carefully and keep track of them, which helps me manage my time effectively.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ "setting reminders and alarms" thay vì "setting reminder and alarms". Ngoài ra, câu "This method helped me don't forget" không đúng ngữ pháp, nên dùng "helps me not to forget". Hãy làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và chính xác hơn.

示例: I usually remember important things by setting reminders and alarms on my smartphone, for example for texts or appointments. This method helps me not to forget anything crucial.

× I can recall details from movies and books. Additionally, I often remember people's name and faces easily.

✓ I can recall details from movies and books. Additionally, I often remember people's names and faces easily.

The word 'name' should be plural 'names' because it refers to multiple people, so the plural form is required to match the plural possessive 'people's'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Oh yes, I once forget my phone at school.

✓ Oh yes, I once forgot my phone at school.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to correctly indicate a past event. This is a past tense issue.

× Moreover, I often forget small things like forgetting to do my homework or forgetting to do my housework.

✓ Moreover, I often forget small things like forgetting to do my homework or forgetting to do my housework.

No correction needed here as 'homework' and 'housework' are uncountable nouns and correctly used in singular form.

× I need to remember my test and my goals every day to stay organized and meet deadlines.

✓ I need to remember my tests and my goals every day to stay organized and meet deadlines.

If the student has multiple tests, 'test' should be plural 'tests' to match the plural 'goals' and the context of multiple deadlines. This is a singular and plural issue.

× For example, I often have a lot of assignments that request allow careful planning, so keep track of that.

✓ For example, I often have a lot of assignments that require careful planning, so I keep track of them.

The original sentence has incorrect verb usage and missing subject. 'Request allow' is incorrect; it should be 'require'. Also, 'keep track of that' lacks a subject and the pronoun 'that' is vague. This is a sentence structure error.

× That helps me manage my time effectively.

✓ That helps me manage my time effectively.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× OK, I usually remember important things by setting reminder and alarms on my smartphone, for instance for text or appointments.

✓ OK, I usually remember important things by setting reminders and alarms on my smartphone, for instance for texts or appointments.

Both 'reminder' and 'text' should be plural ('reminders' and 'texts') because multiple reminders and texts are implied. This is a singular and plural issue.

× This method helped me don't forget anything crucial.

✓ This method helped me not forget anything crucial.

The phrase 'helped me don't forget' is incorrect. After 'helped me', the correct form is 'not forget' (bare infinitive with 'not'). This is a modal verb usage issue.