记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific examples. Avoid repeating words like 'beautiful' twice. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I enjoy remembering special moments. For example, I often recall beautiful scenes from my travels, which helps me keep those memories alive.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'maintain 8 ID'. Try to explain clearly how you remember important tasks and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. Therefore, I usually set reminders on my phone or write notes to make sure I don't miss any urgent work.

建议: Your answer is vague and repetitive. Try to be more specific about what you need to remember daily. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same words.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember my appointments and deadlines at work. For instance, I often keep a to-do list to help me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks.

建议: Your answer has unclear phrases like 'maintain a tie'. Try to use clear and correct expressions. Also, use linking words to explain your methods logically.

示例: To remember important things, I usually set reminders on my phone and keep a planner. This way, I can manage my tasks effectively and avoid forgetting anything important.

× Yes, I'm really good at memorizing in my memories because I love memorizing my beautiful scene and beautiful time.

✓ Yes, I'm really good at memorizing because I love remembering my beautiful scenes and beautiful times.

The phrase 'memorizing in my memories' is redundant and awkward; 'memorizing' is sufficient. Also, 'scene' and 'time' should be plural to match the context. Use 'remembering' instead of repeating 'memorizing' for natural expression.

× Yes, it also happened because sometimes I forget my important work and that's why I maintain 8 ID or a reminder.

✓ Yes, it also happens because sometimes I forget my important work and that's why I maintain an ID or a reminder.

The number '8' before 'ID' is incorrect and confusing. Likely, the student meant 'an ID' or 'a reminder'. Also, 'happened' should be 'happens' to match present tense context.

× If I have a emergency work I note it down.

✓ If I have an emergency task, I note it down.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound like 'emergency'. Also, 'work' is uncountable; 'task' fits better here. A comma is added for clarity.

× Yes, actually I have many things which I should remember in my daily life.

✓ Yes, actually I have many things that I should remember in my daily life.

The relative pronoun 'which' is less appropriate here; 'that' is better for defining clauses. 'Many things' is correct.

× The most important work in my days is about my works.

✓ The most important work in my day is about my tasks.

'Days' should be singular 'day' to refer to a typical day. 'Works' is incorrect; 'tasks' or 'work' is better. 'Work' is uncountable, so 'tasks' is more appropriate.

× I have to maintain a tie and sometimes I have to set a reminder on my phone.

✓ I have to keep a diary and sometimes I set a reminder on my phone.

'Maintain a tie' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'keep a diary' or 'keep a schedule'. Also, 'have to set' can be simplified to 'set' for naturalness.

× So that I should not forget my important things.

✓ So that I do not forget my important things.

'Should not' is unnecessary here; 'do not' is more appropriate to express purpose. 'So that' introduces purpose, so simple present is better.