记忆— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Are you good at memorising things?
考生
I don't particularly think so, although I am learning psychology and neuroscience at university right now. I've been learning a lot of strategies to enhance memory, but personally I don't think I'm particularly good at it.
考官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
考生
I think in many cases when I have to remember important things is for exams and mostly when I cram at night and pull a night one night over I tend to have difficulties remembering and recalling.
考官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
考生
I think there is actually a lot of things that we need to remember. For example, it can be a very little things that you for like short term memory for example where you park your car. But also there's something that you have to remember for long term memory, for example your studies.
考官
How do you remember important things?
考生
I don't have a specific strategies all the time, but for important elements like when I'm studying, I will first read and input the information and then I will try to explain by my own words without seeing anything.
评估
总分
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
分数: 75.0建议: Answerは自然ですが、少し冗長で、主題文が明確でないため、最初に直接質問に答え、その後に詳細を述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"I'm not very good at memorising things, although I study psychology and neuroscience and have learned some memory strategies."のように。
示例: I'm not very good at memorising things, although I study psychology and neuroscience and have learned some memory strategies to improve my memory.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
分数: 70.0建议: 答えは内容が少し不明瞭で、文法的な誤りもあります。まず直接質問に答え、その後に具体例を述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。
示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially during exams when I cram all night. Because of lack of sleep, I find it hard to remember and recall information.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
分数: 75.0建议: 答えは内容が具体的ですが、文法と表現に改善の余地があります。主題文を明確にし、接続詞を使って文を繋げ、より自然な表現にしましょう。
示例: In daily life, I need to remember many things. For instance, I use short-term memory to recall where I parked my car, and long-term memory to retain information for my studies.
How do you remember important things?
分数: 80.0建议: 答えは明確で内容も良いですが、文法の誤り（"a specific strategies"→"specific strategies"）を直し、接続詞を使って流れを良くするとさらに良くなります。
示例: I don't always have specific strategies, but when I study important material, I first read and absorb the information, then I try to explain it in my own words without looking at the text.
语法
× I tend to have difficulties remembering and recalling.
✓ I tend to have difficulties remembering and recalling.
The sentence is correct as it uses the gerund form 'remembering' and 'recalling' appropriately after 'have difficulties'. No correction needed.
× I think there is actually a lot of things that we need to remember.
✓ I think there are actually a lot of things that we need to remember.
The phrase 'a lot of things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.
× it can be a very little things that you for like short term memory for example where you park your car.
✓ it can be very little things, like short term memory, for example where you park your car.
'Things' is plural, so 'a very little things' is incorrect. Removing 'a' and adjusting the phrase corrects the singular/plural mismatch.
× I will try to explain by my own words without seeing anything.
✓ I will try to explain in my own words without seeing anything.
The correct preposition to use with 'explain' in this context is 'in', not 'by'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions.
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