记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I forget everything very early" which is unclear. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget details quickly. However, I always remember special memories because they are important to me."

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget details quickly. However, I always remember special memories because they are important to me.

建议: Your answer tells a story but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently and clarify the sequence of events. Also, avoid vague phrases like "I forget that quietly." Use linking words like "so" or "then" to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I have. For example, two years ago at a wedding, my cousin and I decided to arm wrestle. So, I took off my watch and put it on the table. After the match, I forgot to take my watch and left it there.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Instead of "if I leave that," say "if I lose it." Also, use linking words like "because" to explain reasons.

示例: There are many things I need to remember daily, but the most important is my phone. Because it's an expensive iPhone, I am very careful not to lose it.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and detailed. Instead of "I write my necessaries on that," say "I write down important tasks." Also, explain briefly how the app helps you, using linking words like "so" or "therefore."

示例: I use a very efficient application that reminds me of important tasks. I write down what I need to remember, so the app notifies me at the right time.

× I forget that quietly.

✓ I forgot that quietly.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'forgot' instead of the present tense 'forget'. Using the correct past tense verb clarifies the timing of the action.

× There are a lot, but the most important among them is about my phone.

✓ There are a lot of things, but the most important among them is about my phone.

The phrase 'There are a lot' is incomplete and needs a plural noun to be grammatically correct. Adding 'of things' completes the phrase and clarifies what 'a lot' refers to.

× if I leave that I will never forgive myself.

✓ if I leave it I will never forgive myself.

The pronoun 'that' is less appropriate here when referring to the phone; 'it' is the correct pronoun for objects previously mentioned. Using 'it' improves clarity and naturalness.

× I write my necessaries on that and then it reminds me.

✓ I write my necessities in that and then it reminds me.

The word 'necessaries' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'necessities'. Also, the preposition 'on' is not appropriate here; 'in' is used when referring to writing information inside an application or device.