记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid awkward phrasing like "memorize strongly."

示例: Yes, I believe I am good at memorising things because my social sciences course requires me to remember many theories from sociologists.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and redundancy. Use the present perfect tense correctly and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, provide specific examples clearly.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, recently I forgot to bring my books and other essential items to class.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct grammar and linking words.

示例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, so I write notes on small pieces of paper about what I need to do and what to bring when I go out, especially when I have a lot on my mind.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid informal language like "wanna."

示例: I usually write down important tasks on paper to help me remember them. For example, if I plan to study subjects like mathematics or economics, I note them down to stay organised.

× I'm inclined to think yes because I'm majoring in social sciences, which is I need to memorize strongly the theory from sociologists and.

✓ I'm inclined to think yes because I'm majoring in social sciences, which means I need to memorise the theories from sociologists.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'which is' instead of 'which means' to explain the reason. Also, 'memorize strongly the theory' is awkward; 'memorise the theories' is clearer and grammatically correct. The verb 'memorise' should be in base form after 'need to'. Additionally, 'theory' should be plural 'theories' to match the context.

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important and recently I forget many things.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important and recently I have forgotten many things.

The phrase 'have ever forgotten' is incorrect; 'ever' is not used in affirmative present perfect sentences. The verb 'forget' should be in the present perfect tense 'have forgotten' to indicate past actions with relevance to the present. 'Recently' requires present perfect tense, so 'have forgotten' is appropriate.

× For example, I forget to bring my books and a lot of crucial stuff I forget to bring it.

✓ For example, I forget to bring my books and a lot of crucial stuff; I forget to bring it.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect pronoun use. 'Stuff' is uncountable and should not be followed by 'it' without clarification. The semicolon separates two related clauses. Alternatively, 'I forget to bring a lot of crucial stuff' is sufficient without 'I forget to bring it'.

× I need small paper and I write down on the paper what I will doing in my daily life and what I want to bring when I go to class or yeah, everywhere, anywhere because when I have a lot on my mind.

✓ I need small pieces of paper and I write down on the paper what I will be doing in my daily life and what I want to bring when I go to class or anywhere, because I have a lot on my mind.

'Small paper' is incorrect; 'small pieces of paper' is the correct plural form. 'What I will doing' is incorrect; it should be 'what I will be doing' to form the future continuous tense. 'Or yeah, everywhere, anywhere' is informal and redundant; 'or anywhere' suffices.

× I constantly write down on the paper the important things I need to remember each day. For the example like maybe today I wanna study, so I write on the paper.

✓ I constantly write down on paper the important things I need to remember each day. For example, maybe today I want to study, so I write it on paper.

'For the example like' is incorrect; 'For example' is the correct phrase. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is appropriate in formal speech. 'Write on the paper' is better as 'write it on paper' for clarity and naturalness.

× I wanted to study mathematics, economics, or anything else. So it's me. Help me stay organized.

✓ I want to study mathematics, economics, or anything else. So it helps me stay organised.

'I wanted' is past tense but the context is present/future intention, so 'I want' is correct. 'So it's me' is unclear and incorrect; 'So it helps me stay organised' correctly explains the purpose. 'Organised' is the British English spelling.