记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "I am not a good memorizing thing." Try to use clear topic sentences and link your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. I tend to forget details easily, so I rely on my mobile phone to set reminders for important events. For example, I always set alarms to remember appointments or deadlines.

建议: Your answer should be clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like "uh." Also, correct grammar mistakes and be specific about the event.

示例: Yes, once I forgot my mobile phone at the grocery store. After paying the bill, I placed it on the counter and accidentally left it there. I only realized it when I got home, which was quite stressful.

建议: Your answer should start with a clear topic sentence and use proper grammar. Use linking words to explain how technology helps you remember daily tasks. Avoid awkward phrasing and be more specific.

示例: I need to remember important events and appointments in my daily life. Therefore, I use technology like my mobile phone and calendar apps to set reminders. These notifications help me stay organized and not forget anything important.

建议: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your methods clearly. Also, avoid repetition and clarify your points.

示例: I use two methods to remember important things. First, I set reminders on my phone and calendar. Second, I write important notes in my diary, which I read daily to help me recall tasks easily.

× No, I am not a good memorizing thing.

✓ No, I am not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'a good memorizing thing' is incorrect because 'memorizing' is a verb form used as an adjective here, but 'thing' is not appropriate to describe a person. The correct expression is 'good at memorizing things' to indicate ability.

× I only remember some numbers and names of the name of person.

✓ I only remember some numbers and names of people.

The phrase 'names of the name of person' is redundant and incorrect. 'Names of people' is the correct plural form to refer to multiple persons' names.

× And to be remember all the things I need to be help of mobile phones.

✓ And to remember all the things, I need the help of mobile phones.

The phrase 'to be remember' is incorrect; it should be 'to remember'. Also, 'need to be help of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'need the help of'.

× I always set a reminder mobile phones to remember the important events.

✓ I always set reminders on my mobile phone to remember important events.

The phrase 'set a reminder mobile phones' is incorrect. It should be 'set reminders on my mobile phone' to correctly use the preposition and plural form.

× Just once a time I forgot my mobile phone at the grocery store and it was happened when I paid my mobile, uh, my bill of the grocery and I put my mobile phone on the contour and eagerly I forget it on, on that place.

✓ Just once, I forgot my mobile phone at the grocery store. It happened when I paid my bill at the grocery, and I put my mobile phone on the counter and accidentally forgot it there.

The sentence has multiple tense and word choice errors. 'It was happened' should be 'it happened' (simple past). 'Contour' is incorrect; the correct word is 'counter'. 'Eagerly I forget it' is incorrect; it should be 'accidentally forgot it' to indicate past action.

× And I realized it when I came at home.

✓ And I realized it when I came home.

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary after 'came' in this context. The correct phrase is 'came home'.

× But take a help of technology to remember my daily life special event and I set a reminder on my mobile phone and sometimes on calendar and there are notification easily me remind the all things a day before the event.

✓ I take help from technology to remember special events in my daily life. I set reminders on my mobile phone and sometimes on the calendar, and there are notifications that easily remind me of all things a day before the event.

The phrase 'take a help of' is incorrect; it should be 'take help from'. Also, 'on calendar' should be 'on the calendar'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× I do two things to remember the important things. First I set a reminder and on the calendar and I also do another week right now on the my diary because I read it daily basis so I can easily recall them.

✓ I do two things to remember important things. First, I set reminders on the calendar, and I also write in my diary because I read it daily, so I can easily recall them.

The phrase 'set a reminder and on the calendar' is incorrect; it should be 'set reminders on the calendar'. 'Do another week right now on the my diary' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'write in my diary'. 'Read it daily basis' should be 'read it daily'.