记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำเชื่อมที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น "but however" และควรขยายคำตอบให้ชัดเจนขึ้นโดยใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม เช่น "because" หรือ "although" เพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและมีความสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I usually review my lessons before tests. However, this method does not work for everything, so I sometimes need to try other techniques.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น "last month" แทน "on last month" และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหล นอกจากนี้ควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่หลากหลายเพื่อแสดงความรู้สึกและเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

示例: Yes, last month I forgot to register for a competition. I realized this when I received a notification saying I had missed the deadline. I felt very sad because I lost a valuable opportunity.

建议: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและครบถ้วน เช่น "things" แทน "thing" และปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ให้เหมาะสม นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิดและขยายคำตอบให้ชัดเจนขึ้น เช่น การอธิบายผลลัพธ์ของการลืมสิ่งต่างๆ

示例: There are several things I need to remember in my daily life. First, I have to remember my homework or any assignments given by my teachers. Also, I need to remember things I have to buy after school because if I forget, it can cause problems.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น "I used to make mistakes" แทน "Before myself always make a mistake" และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม นอกจากนี้ควรอธิบายเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับวิธีการใช้งานแอปพลิเคชันเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และชัดเจน

示例: I used to forget to do my homework or bring materials to workshops. However, after I started using an application called To Do List, it has greatly improved my study life by helping me keep track of my tasks.

× Yes, because it easier than calculate and I usually would review the lesson before test, but however this method didn't fit with everything.

✓ Yes, because it is easier than calculating and I usually review the lesson before the test, but however this method doesn't fit with everything.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'it' to form the correct comparative structure 'it is easier'. 'Calculate' should be in gerund form 'calculating' to act as a noun after 'than'. 'Would review' is incorrect here; simple present 'review' fits better to express habitual action. 'Test' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Didn't fit' should be 'doesn't fit' to maintain present tense consistency. 'However' is redundant with 'but' and can be omitted or replaced.

× Yes, on last month I forgot to register competition and I know that I forgot because the competition sent the notification that I was left for it already.

✓ Yes, last month I forgot to register for the competition and I know that I forgot because the competition sent a notification that I had already missed it.

'On last month' is incorrect; 'last month' is sufficient without 'on'. 'Register competition' needs the preposition 'for'. 'Sent the notification' should be 'sent a notification' as it is a countable noun. 'I was left for it already' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I had already missed it' to indicate past perfect tense for an action completed before another past action.

× I feel really sad from the reason that I missed the opportunity.

✓ I feel really sad because I missed the opportunity.

'Sad from the reason' is incorrect; the correct conjunction to express cause is 'because'. 'From' is not used to indicate cause in this context.

× There are several thing I had to remember in my daily life.

✓ There are several things I have to remember in my daily life.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'several'. 'Had to' implies past necessity; 'have to' is correct for present habitual actions.

× First is remember homework or any school assignment that I assign by the teachers.

✓ First is to remember homework or any school assignment assigned by the teachers.

The verb 'remember' needs the infinitive form 'to remember' after 'is'. 'That I assign by the teachers' is incorrect; the assignments are given by teachers, so passive voice 'assigned by the teachers' is correct.

× Something I have to buy after school and if I forgot the result will be so bad to.

✓ Something I have to buy after school, and if I forget, the result will be very bad too.

'If I forgot' should be 'if I forget' to maintain present tense in conditional sentence. 'So bad to' is incorrect; 'very bad too' is the correct phrase. A comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.

× Before myself always make a mistake on forgetting to do some homework or forget to bring some material to the workshop, but after I use the application call To Do List, the function are very improve my study life.

✓ Before, I always made mistakes by forgetting to do some homework or forgetting to bring some materials to the workshop, but after I started using the application called To Do List, its functions have greatly improved my study life.

'Myself' is incorrectly used; subject pronoun 'I' is correct. 'Always make a mistake' should be past tense 'always made mistakes' to indicate past habitual action. 'On forgetting' should be 'by forgetting'. 'Forget' should be 'forgetting' to parallel 'forgetting to do'. 'Material' should be plural 'materials'. 'Call' should be past participle 'called'. 'The function are very improve' is incorrect; 'its functions have greatly improved' is correct subject-verb agreement and verb form.