记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子简洁，避免重复。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget many details, especially when studying. For example, I struggle to memorise articles in my Chinese classes, and sometimes I even forget to take my medicine.

建议: 回答内容较具体，但句子结构和时态使用不够准确，如“which hold by”应为“held by”。建议注意时态一致性和句子连贯性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I once forgot a very important meeting held by my professor because I stayed up very late the night before. As a result, my professor was angry and scolded me, which made me feel very guilty.

建议: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误，如“when she takes the arm lessons”不明确。建议明确表达内容，使用正确的词汇和句子结构，并适当使用连接词。

示例: Well, I need to remember many things every day, but the most important is the schedule for my lessons. I have several classes daily, so I must remember which classroom to go to and what time to get up.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但句子略显重复，且连接词使用不够自然。建议简化表达，使用更自然的连接词，使回答更流畅。

示例: I usually write notes and stick them on the fridge. This way, whenever I pass by, I can see reminders, such as the time to take my medicine, so I don't forget.

× I'm not good at memory things.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'是不正确的表达，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆事物的能力。memory是名词，不能直接修饰things。

× I have some problem to recite articles in my Chinese classes and in the daily life I I always forget to take the medicine.

✓ I have some problems reciting articles in my Chinese classes and in daily life I always forget to take medicine.

'problem'应为复数'problems'，因为表示多个问题；'to recite'改为动名词'reciting'更自然；'the medicine'前的定冠词不需要，medicine作为不可数名词。

× Yes, I forgot a very significant meeting which hold by my professor because I stayed up very late the day before and my professor was angry and she yelled at me.

✓ Yes, I forgot a very significant meeting which was held by my professor because I stayed up very late the day before and my professor was angry and she yelled at me.

'hold'应为过去分词'held'，用作定语修饰meeting，表示被动含义。

× Well, I need to remember various kinds of things every day, but most important thing is when she takes the arm lessons.

✓ Well, I need to remember various kinds of things every day, but the most important thing is when she takes the arm lessons.

缺少定冠词'the'修饰'most important thing'，使表达更准确。

× Well, I need to remember various kinds of things every day, but most important thing is when she takes the arm lessons.

✓ Well, I need to remember various kinds of things every day, but the most important thing is when I take the arm lessons.

这里'she'指代错误，应该用第一人称'I'，因为说话者自己上课。

× I have a lot of lessons every day and I should remember the classroom I should go and what time I should get up.

✓ I have a lot of lessons every day and I should remember the classroom I should go to and what time I should get up.

缺少介词'to'，'go to the classroom'是正确表达。

× I always take a note and stick it to the fridge so every time I pass by I can see it.

✓ I always take notes and stick them to the fridge so every time I pass by I can see them.

'a note'改为复数'notes'更符合习惯用法；'it'改为'them'与复数notes一致。

× For example, I always take note of the time I should take the medicine on the fridge and so I will not forget it.

✓ For example, I always take note of the time I should take medicine on the fridge so I will not forget it.

'the medicine'中定冠词'the'不需要，medicine作为不可数名词。