记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use correct verb forms like 'memorising' instead of 'memorize', and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, avoid redundancy and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I would say I am average at memorising things because I tend to remember information quickly when I find it interesting; however, I struggle to grasp difficult concepts.

建议: Your answer tells a good story but needs better sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas, and avoid informal phrases like 'me and my family'. Also, try to be more concise and clear.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important once. After a tiring trip, I left my suitcase in the back of an auto rickshaw and forgot to take it when I reached home, so my family and I had to search everywhere to find it.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid contradictory phrases like 'so but'. Use clear linking words and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, be specific about what you personally need to remember.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to eat properly and get enough sleep because these habits help me stay healthy and happy.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains many fillers like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to avoid these and use linking words such as 'however' and 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, combine short sentences for better coherence.

示例: I remember important things quite easily; however, I tend to forget small, trivial matters, so I usually note them down on my phone or ask my parents to remind me.

× I would probably say I'm average at memorize things because I tend to memorize quickly when I find something interesting, but I lack in grasping concepts which are difficult for me to understand.

✓ I would probably say I'm average at memorizing things because I tend to memorize quickly when I find something interesting, but I lack in grasping concepts which are difficult for me to understand.

The phrase 'average at' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing form) to indicate the activity, so 'memorize' should be corrected to 'memorizing'. This is a common usage pattern in English.

× I completely forgot to pick up the suitcase when I reached home and me and my family had to roam all places to find.

✓ I completely forgot to pick up the suitcase when I reached home and my family and I had to roam all places to find it.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the clause; the correct subject pronoun is 'I'. Also, 'to find' is incomplete and needs an object, so 'it' is added to complete the meaning.

× I would probably say it differs from person to person because each of us have many tasks to complete so but the most important thing is to eat properly, have a good night's sleep and just live your life happily.

✓ I would probably say it differs from person to person because each of us has many tasks to complete, but the most important thing is to eat properly, have a good night's sleep and just live your life happily.

The conjunctions 'so' and 'but' are incorrectly combined; only one is needed here. Also, 'each of us have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'each of us has' because 'each' is singular.