记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“mem writer”应为“memorizer”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, after I finish reading a book, I find it hard to explain the content to others in my own words.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复和冗余，表达时更简洁明了。

示例: I rarely forget important things because I always write them down on paper and remind myself by reading the notes.

建议: 回答内容较具体，但语法和表达仍需改进。建议注意句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复。

示例: I need to remember the friends I promised to play badminton with because many invite me. Sometimes I forget, so I write it down in my phone's calendar to remind myself.

建议: 回答中存在时态错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用正确的时态，完整表达想法，并避免重复词汇。

示例: Usually, I write important things down on paper or repeat them in my mind. When studying, it's harder, so I make sure to write notes to help me remember.

× No, actually I think I'm not a good mem writer.

✓ No, actually I think I'm not good at memorising.

这里动词短语'mem writer'不正确，应该使用动名词形式'memorising'来表达记忆的动作。动词后面接动名词表示习惯或能力。

× For example, I when I finish reading the book I hardly to paraphrase what it is the content is and to tell others.

✓ For example, when I finish reading a book, I can hardly paraphrase its content and tell others.

句子结构混乱，'I when I finish'重复且不通顺，'hardly to paraphrase'中动词不定式用法错误，应为'hardly paraphrase'。需要调整句子顺序和动词形式使句子通顺。

× Well, for this question I'm seldom to forgot something important 'cause when it comes I always writing it down the paper to remember to notice me and I will read it in my mind.

✓ Well, for this question, I seldom forget something important because when it comes, I always write it down on paper to remind myself and I will read it in my mind.

'I'm seldom to forgot'中情态副词和动词不定式用法错误，应为'seldom forget'；'always writing'应为'write'；'to notice me'表达不当，应为'remind myself'。需要调整情态副词位置和动词形式。

× I always writing it down the paper to remember to notice me

✓ I always write it down on paper to remind myself

'down the paper'中缺少介词'on'，正确表达是'write it down on paper'。此外，'to remember to notice me'表达不准确，应为'remind myself'。

× But I sometimes I will lose my mind so I have to write it down in the calendar in my cell phone and to notice me.

✓ But sometimes I lose my mind, so I have to write it down in the calendar on my cell phone to remind myself.

句中'I sometimes I'重复，且'write it down in the calendar in my cell phone'介词使用不当，应为'on my cell phone'；'to notice me'应为'remind myself'。

× Usually I just wrote it down on the paper or just repeated in my mind.

✓ Usually I just write it down on paper or just repeat it in my mind.

句子描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时，'wrote'和'repeated'为过去式，不符合语境。

× I think when important things come I will force me to remember it.

✓ I think when important things come, I will force myself to remember them.

'force me'应为'reforce myself'，反身代词用法错误；'remember it'应根据复数改为'them'。

× But when I was study it's a little bit hard.

✓ But when I study, it's a little bit hard.

'was study'时态错误，应为一般现在时'study'，因为描述的是习惯或常态。

× I should I I must write it on the paper and.

✓ I should, I must write it on paper.

句子结构混乱，重复'I'且句尾不完整，需简化为完整句子。