记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response to the question, then explain briefly without repeating words like 'like' too much. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences to be more effective.

示例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. This is because I struggled with my mental health, and the medication I took slowed down my thinking. However, since I stopped taking the medicine, I feel my memory is improving.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid unnecessary phrases and keep your answer focused. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid slang or inappropriate expressions. Also, correct small mistakes like 'plan' should be 'plane'.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my passport just 20 minutes before my plane was about to take off. My mother was very upset because she worries a lot. Fortunately, I managed to bring it in time.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid informal words like 'cause'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be more specific about why these things are important.

示例: In daily life, I need to remember many things, but the most important are eating well and taking care of my health. This is because if I do not eat properly, I may have health problems. Therefore, loving and caring for myself is essential.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to answer directly and avoid repeating phrases like 'I don't know how to say it'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific examples.

示例: I am not very good at remembering important things by myself. Therefore, I rely on my boyfriend and sister to remind me about important tasks. Their help makes it easier for me to manage my responsibilities.

× Honestly the last person to be good at memorizing things in my family since I used to struggle with my mental health and the doctor like prescribed me like a medicine that really slowed down my brain so it has me like thinking less so ever since I stopped drinking the pill I feel like I'm getting.

✓ Honestly, I was the last person to be good at memorizing things in my family since I used to struggle with my mental health and the doctor prescribed me medicine that really slowed down my brain, so it made me think less. Ever since I stopped taking the pill, I feel like I'm improving.

The sentence lacked proper past tense forms such as 'was' instead of 'the last person' alone, and 'prescribed' is correct but the sentence structure was confusing. Also, 'has me like thinking less' is incorrect; it should be 'made me think less' to reflect past effect. 'Stopped drinking the pill' is incorrect; 'stopped taking the pill' is proper. The sentence was long and needed punctuation for clarity.

× So there was one time I forgot my passport literally like 20 minutes before the plan about to take off.

✓ So there was one time I forgot my passport literally like 20 minutes before the plane was about to take off.

The word 'plan' is incorrect; it should be 'plane' (noun for aircraft). Also, 'about to take off' needs the past continuous 'was about to take off' to match the past tense context.

× So yeah, I didn't know how to tell her, but I brought myself.

✓ So yeah, I didn't know how to tell her, but I told myself.

The phrase 'I brought myself' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'I told myself' meaning self-encouragement or self-reassurance.

× If you don't eat that mean you will bring yourself health problem and I'm pretty sure we all wouldn't want that.

✓ If you don't eat, that means you will bring yourself health problems and I'm pretty sure we all wouldn't want that.

'That mean' should be 'that means' to agree with singular subject. 'Health problem' should be plural 'health problems' because generally multiple health issues can arise. Also, a comma is needed after 'eat' for clarity.

× As you already know, I'm the last person to be good at remembering things, so even important thing.

✓ As you already know, I'm the last person to be good at remembering things, even important things.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things' to agree with the plural context of 'things'.