记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

示例: Yes, people who know me often say I have a good memory because I can easily remember knowledge and complex skills.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议使用简单句子，明确描述事件，并避免重复。

示例: Yes, when I was six, I forgot to bring my books for class the next day, so I was not allowed to enter the classroom.

建议: 回答中时态错误和表达不流畅，建议使用正确时态，简洁表达，并具体说明需要记住的内容。

示例: As a college student, I need to remember my study schedule and part-time job hours. I make detailed plans to manage my time effectively.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用正确的词汇和句型，清楚描述记忆方法。

示例: I usually set reminders on my smartphone to help me meet deadlines. Also, I write notes and place them on my desk so I see them before leaving.

× Yes, the people that know about me always said I have a good I'm good at memory because I can always remember the knowledge and complex skills.

✓ Yes, the people who know about me always say I have a good memory because I can always remember knowledge and complex skills.

这里的主语是复数people，谓语动词应该用复数形式say，而不是过去式said。'I'm good at memory'结构不正确，应改为'I have a good memory'。

× Of course, when I was six years old, I forgot to bring the books that I need to have lessons tomorrow, and because of that I was I was not allowed to enter the classroom because I forgot my study.

✓ Of course, when I was six years old, I forgot to bring the books that I needed for lessons the next day, and because of that I was not allowed to enter the classroom because I forgot my study materials.

描述过去的事情，'need'应使用过去式'needed'。'tomorrow'应改为'the next day'以符合过去时间。'I was I was'重复，应删除一个。'forgot my study'表达不完整，应改为'forgot my study materials'。

× Well as a college student I have to remembered my schedules of the study and my part time jobs.

✓ Well, as a college student, I have to remember my study schedules and my part-time jobs.

'have to'后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式'remembered'。'schedules of the study'表达不自然，应改为'study schedules'。

× I really need to make detailed plans to make my every plan, my every management to be finished.

✓ I really need to make detailed plans to complete all my tasks and manage everything properly.

'make my every plan, my every management to be finished'表达不自然且语法错误，应改为更自然的表达方式。

× I always make some schedules in my smart because it would it would remind me to finish it before the deadline.

✓ I always make some schedules on my smartphone because it reminds me to finish tasks before the deadline.

'make some schedules in my smart'中的'in my smart'不正确，应为'on my smartphone'。'would it would'重复，应删除一个。

× Also I would write some notes to tips on my desk and every time I left I would saw it.

✓ Also, I write some notes and tips on my desk, and every time I leave, I see them.

'would write'和'would saw'时态使用不当，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时。'would saw'中的'saw'是过去式，应改为'see'。