记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan dan kesalahan kata seperti 'I can't forgot' yang seharusnya 'I can't forget'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas untuk menyampaikan ide.

示例: No, I'm not good at memorising things. I often forget things, especially my personal belongings, because I think I have a short memory.

建议: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Gunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'really really'. Berikan contoh spesifik untuk memperkuat jawaban.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten many important things before, such as appointments or deadlines, which caused me some problems.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren dan hindari kalimat yang terlalu panjang tanpa jeda.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember to eat healthy food, exercise regularly at the gym, write my work tasks on a To-Do List, and practice speaking English every day.

建议: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat yang lengkap. Jelaskan metode yang digunakan untuk mengingat sesuatu dengan contoh spesifik.

示例: I usually try to remember important things by repeating them several times or writing notes to help me recall later.

× The short answer is no, I'm not good memorizing things.

✓ The short answer is no, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The verb 'good' is usually followed by the preposition 'at' before a verb in the -ing form. The sentence is missing the preposition 'at'. (Verba 'good' biasanya diikuti oleh preposisi 'at' sebelum kata kerja bentuk -ing. Kalimat ini kehilangan preposisi 'at'.)

× I can't forgot.

✓ I can't forget.

After modal verbs like 'can't', the base form of the verb should be used, not the past tense. 'Forgot' is past tense; the correct form is 'forget'. (Setelah modal seperti 'can't', harus menggunakan bentuk dasar kata kerja, bukan bentuk lampau. 'Forgot' adalah bentuk lampau; yang benar adalah 'forget'.)

× I easy to forgot about things and especially with my own things because I don't know.

✓ I easily forget things, especially my own things, because I don't know.

The adverb 'easily' should be used instead of the adjective 'easy' to modify the verb 'forget'. Also, 'forgot' is past tense; 'forget' is correct here. The sentence structure is improved for clarity. 'Adverb 'easily' harus digunakan menggantikan adjective 'easy' untuk memodifikasi kata kerja 'forget'. Juga, 'forgot' adalah bentuk lampau; yang benar adalah 'forget'. Struktur kalimat diperbaiki untuk kejelasan.'

× I can't forgot.

✓ I can't forget.

Modal verbs like 'can't' require the base form of the verb, not the past tense. 'Forgot' is past tense; 'forget' is the base form. (Modal verbs seperti 'can't' harus diikuti oleh bentuk dasar kata kerja, bukan bentuk lampau. 'Forgot' adalah bentuk lampau; yang benar adalah 'forget'.)

× I've ever forgotten something important and that's so many.

✓ I've forgotten many important things.

The phrase 'I've ever forgotten' is incorrect; 'ever' is unnecessary here. 'That's so many' is ungrammatical; 'many important things' is correct. Frasa 'I've ever forgotten' salah; 'ever' tidak diperlukan di sini. 'That's so many' tidak gramatikal; yang benar adalah 'many important things'.

× I have so many lost memory of important things that I shouldn't.

✓ I have lost many important memories that I shouldn't have.

The phrase 'lost memory' should be plural 'lost memories'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'have' at the end completes the meaning. Frasa 'lost memory' harus jamak 'lost memories'. Juga, kalimat tidak lengkap; menambahkan 'have' di akhir melengkapi makna.

× What I need to remember in daily life is eat healthy food, go to sports or gyms and maybe I could just write it my To Do List for works and trying to speak English like practice every day it's.

✓ What I need to remember in daily life is to eat healthy food, go to sports or gyms, maybe write it on my To Do List for work, and try to practice speaking English every day.

After 'is', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to eat'. 'Write it my To Do List' needs preposition 'on'. 'Works' should be singular 'work'. 'Trying to speak English like practice every day it's' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'try to practice speaking English every day'. Setelah 'is', kata kerja harus dalam bentuk infinitif 'to eat'. 'Write it my To Do List' perlu preposisi 'on'. 'Works' harus tunggal 'work'. 'Trying to speak English like practice every day it's' tidak gramatikal; diperbaiki menjadi 'try to practice speaking English every day'.

× Maybe I can, Maybe I think over and over again and back to old memorize.

✓ Maybe I can. Maybe I think over and over again and go back to old memories.

The phrase 'back to old memorize' is incorrect; 'go back to old memories' is correct. 'Memorize' is a verb; 'memories' is the noun form needed here. Frasa 'back to old memorize' salah; yang benar adalah 'go back to old memories'. 'Memorize' adalah kata kerja; yang dibutuhkan di sini adalah bentuk kata benda 'memories'.