记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“I'm often forgot”应为“I often forget”。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget small details like dates or where I put my keys. Sometimes, my mind goes blank when I try to remember important information. Therefore, I rely on taking notes or using reminder apps to help me recall things.

建议: 回答内容具体且有条理，但存在语法错误，如“made it a tab”应为“made it a habit”，以及时态错误。建议注意时态一致性和词汇准确性。

示例: Yes, I once completely forgot my close friend's birthday because I was overwhelmed with studying. I didn't call or send any message, and it slipped my mind until I saw others posting about it on social media. I felt terrible and immediately apologized. Since then, I have made it a habit to set reminders on my phone for important dates.

建议: 回答中存在语法和表达不完整的问题，如“and I really.”未完成句子。建议注意句子完整性，使用连贯的连接词，并丰富细节。

示例: As a student, I need to remember many things daily. For example, I have to learn new vocabulary, phrases, and formulas taught in class for exams. Additionally, I keep track of appointments, tests, and school events like festivals and orientations. I also try to remember new names and faces, which helps me build good relationships.

建议: 回答表达了多种记忆方法，但存在词汇错误，如“Canada apps”应为“calendar apps”，以及语法错误。建议注意词汇准确性和句子结构的清晰。

示例: I use writing tools to help me remember important tasks. Usually, I rely on calendar apps or reminder notifications on my phone. For especially important things, I write them down in a notebook or repeat them out loud several times. Sometimes, I associate information with a specific image or place to help me recall it later.

× I'm often forgot small details like dates or where I put my keys.

✓ I often forget small details like dates or where I put my keys.

这里使用了过去时态 'forgot'，但句子中有频率副词 'often'，表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'forget'。

× I once completely forgot my close friends birthday because I was overwhelmed with studying at that time.

✓ I once completely forgot my close friend's birthday because I was overwhelmed with studying at that time.

这里 'forgot' 使用正确，表示过去发生的动作。

× I once completely forgot my close friends birthday because I was overwhelmed with studying at that time.

✓ I once completely forgot my close friend's birthday because I was overwhelmed with studying at that time.

'close friends birthday' 应为所有格，正确形式是 'close friend's birthday'。

× I didn't call or send any message and it just slipped my mind until the next time I saw other people posting about it on social media.

✓ I didn't call or send any message and it just slipped my mind until the next time I saw other people posting about it on social media.

句子时态使用正确，无需修改。

× Since then I have made it a tab to set reminders on my phone so that I never forgot important days.

✓ Since then I have made it a habit to set reminders on my phone so that I never forget important days.

'made it a tab' 应为 'made it a habit'，且 'never forgot' 应用一般现在时 'never forget'，因为是习惯性动作。

× In my daily life, I need to remember many things because I'm a student.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember many things because I'm a student.

句子无单复数错误，无需修改。

× For example, I have to remember new vocabulary and phrases and formula that are taught in class during exam.

✓ For example, I have to remember new vocabulary, phrases, and formulas that are taught in class during exams.

'formula' 应为复数 'formulas'，'exam' 应为复数 'exams'，因为指多个考试。

× I keep track of important appointments, schedule tests and school events such as festivals and orientations.

✓ I keep track of important appointments, schedule tests, and school events such as festivals and orientations.

句子中缺少逗号，列举时应使用逗号分隔。

× I also try to remember new names and new faces. It helped me build good relationship with them and I really.

✓ I also try to remember new names and new faces. It helps me build good relationships with them, and I really do.

时态应保持一致，'helped' 改为 'helps'，'relationship' 应为复数 'relationships'，句尾不完整，补充 'do'。

× I use the writing tools to help me remember important things for every task.

✓ I use writing tools to help me remember important things for every task.

'the writing tools' 中 'the' 不必要，去掉更自然。

× I usually rely on Canada apps or reminders notification on my phone.

✓ I usually rely on calendar apps or reminder notifications on my phone.

'Canada apps' 应为 'calendar apps'，'reminders notification' 应为复数 'reminder notifications'。

× Sometimes I also associate with information with a specific image or place, which really help me to record it later without this text.

✓ Sometimes I also associate information with a specific image or place, which really helps me to recall it later without this text.

'associate with information' 中多余 'with'，应为 'associate information with'；'help' 应为第三人称单数 'helps'；'record' 改为更合适的 'recall'。