记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“prefer to recording”应为“prefer to record”，且表达不够自然。建议简化表达，避免使用不准确的谚语，且注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Instead, I prefer to write down all the tasks I need to do on a list. This way, I can follow the list and make sure I complete everything on time.

建议: 回答较为直接，但表达略显重复且有语法问题，如“so to complete all my talks on time”不够自然。建议使用更流畅的句式，并丰富细节。

示例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I usually write everything down on my list. This helps me remember important tasks and complete them on time.

建议: 回答内容具体，但存在语法错误，如“clinical to medical students”应为“clinical medical student”，且句子结构不够流畅。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: As a clinical medical student, I need to remember many things in my daily life. For example, I have to recall the procedures of the operations we perform each day, and I also need to collect clinical data for my dissertation.

建议: 回答中有明显语法和用词错误，如“pain in my pocket”应为“pen in my pocket”，且表达不够自然。建议纠正词汇错误，简化句子结构，并使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: As a clinical medical student, I always carry a pen in my pocket. When I encounter urgent tasks, I write them down immediately on paper so that I don't forget to complete them on time.

× No, I'm not, but I prefer to recording all the talks I have to do on the list.

✓ No, I'm not, but I prefer to record all the talks I have to do on the list.

动词prefer后面接动词不定式to do，而不是动名词recording。这里应使用动词原形record。

× As the saying goes, the weakest ink is last longer than the strongest memory.

✓ As the saying goes, the weakest ink lasts longer than the strongest memory.

短语中应使用动词第三人称单数形式lasts，且原句中使用了错误的比较结构，应该是lasts longer。

× I'd usually prefer to write all the things down on my list.

✓ I'd usually prefer to write all the things down on my list.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× In this way I won't forget important things and so to complete all my talks on time.

✓ In this way I won't forget important things and so complete all my talks on time.

so后面不需要to，直接用动词原形complete。

× Well, there are a lot of things I need to remember in my daily life as a clinical to medical students.

✓ Well, there are a lot of things I need to remember in my daily life as a clinical medical student.

clinical和medical都是形容词，不能用to连接，且student应为单数形式。

× Well, as a clinical medical students, I'll always have a pain in my pocket, so when I encountered emergent or urgent things, I will write all the names in the paper immediately.

✓ Well, as a clinical medical student, I'll always have a pen in my pocket, so when I encounter emergent or urgent things, I will write all the names on the paper immediately.

students应为单数student；pain应为pen；encountered应为现在时encounter以保持时态一致；in the paper应为on the paper。