记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'subject' ควรเป็น 'subjects' และปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I prefer subjects like English and biology, which require memorisation rather than calculation. Therefore, I find it easier to remember information in these areas.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหล เช่น ใช้ 'since I started' แทน 'since I start' และเพิ่มคำอธิบายเพื่อให้เนื้อหาชัดเจนขึ้น

示例: Yes, I once forgot my ID card when I needed to sit for an exam during my medical studies. Since the examiners had to check my ID before allowing me into the room, it caused some delay.

建议: ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'a lot of things' แทน 'a lot of thing' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์ นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน

示例: I need to remember many tasks in my daily life because my work is quite hectic. Therefore, I keep a To Do List on my phone to ensure I don't forget important things.

建议: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น ใช้ 'before I finish the day' แทน 'before I finish a day' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และชัดเจนมากขึ้น

示例: I always make a To Do List on my phone and check it before I finish the day to review what I need to do. This helps me prioritize my tasks and stay organized.

× I think I'm quite good at memorising things because I don't really like subject that involves calculation.

✓ I think I'm quite good at memorising things because I don't really like subjects that involve calculation.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to more than one subject in general. Also, 'involves' should be 'involve' to agree with the plural noun 'subjects'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× For example the subject like English or biology that doesn't need to.

✓ For example, subjects like English or biology don't require calculation.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'The subject like English or biology that doesn't need to' is unclear and lacks a verb. Rephrasing to 'subjects like English or biology don't require calculation' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I have forgotten once since I start becoming a medical student.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten once since I started becoming a medical student.

The verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to match the time frame indicated by 'since'. This is a past tense issue.

× I forgot my ID card when I need to sit for the exam.

✓ I forgot my ID card when I needed to sit for the exam.

The verb 'need' should be in the past tense 'needed' to match the past event 'forgot'. This is a present tense issue.

× I think I have to remember a lot of To Do List because my work is quite hectic and I have to do a lot of thing.

✓ I think I have to remember a lot of To Do Lists because my work is quite hectic and I have to do a lot of things.

'To Do List' should be plural 'To Do Lists' and 'thing' should be plural 'things' because they refer to multiple items. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Sometimes I forgot to do important things so I always keep my To Do List in my phone to check what I have to do.

✓ Sometimes I forget to do important things so I always keep my To Do List on my phone to check what I have to do.

The verb 'forgot' should be in the present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action indicated by 'sometimes' and 'always'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' (preposition issue). This is a past tense issue and preposition issue.

× I always make my To Do List on my phone and check it before I finish a day about what I have to do before.

✓ I always make my To Do List on my phone and check it before I finish the day to see what I have to do.

The phrase 'before I finish a day about what I have to do before' is awkward and incorrect. 'A day' should be 'the day' (article issue), and the sentence is rephrased for clarity. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure issue.