记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with a specific example. Avoid redundancy and incorrect articles (e.g., 'a elephant' should be 'an elephant').

示例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and facts for my studies without much effort.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to directly answer the question with a clear example and explain why you forgot it. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last year I missed my friend's birthday because I was very busy studying for exams.

建议: Your answer covers relevant points but could be more organized and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about your tasks.

示例: As a student, I need to remember several daily tasks. For example, I have to complete my assignments, do household chores like cooking and cleaning, and sometimes prepare vegetables for meals.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Use linking words to organize your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, improve sentence structure for better clarity.

示例: I usually remember important things by writing them in my notebook and setting alarms on my phone. For special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries, I make sure to note them down so I don't forget.

× I have a elephant memory, so I usually memorize the thing.

✓ I have an elephant memory, so I usually memorize things.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound like 'elephant'. Also, 'the thing' is incorrect here; it should be plural 'things' to indicate multiple items memorized.

× Then at that time I forget it due to my due to my study study because I was busy in my in my school schooling.

✓ Then at that time I forgot it due to my studies because I was busy with my schooling.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past time reference. Also, 'study study' is a repetition error and should be 'studies'. 'Busy in my schooling' should be 'busy with my schooling' for correct preposition usage.

× So it is a thing that I forget in.

✓ So it is something that I forgot.

'A thing' is vague and awkward here; 'something' is more appropriate. Also, 'forget' should be past tense 'forgot' to match the past event. The phrase 'forget in' is incorrect and should be omitted.

× As I'm a student so I usually remember a lot of things, for example, make the assignment, do my household and also do my household chores, make some vegetables etcetera.

✓ As I'm a student, I usually remember a lot of things, for example, to do assignments, do my household chores, and prepare some vegetables, etc.

'Make the assignment' is incorrect; it should be 'do assignments'. 'Do my household' is incomplete; it should be 'do my household chores'. Also, 'make some vegetables' is better expressed as 'prepare some vegetables'. The sentence is improved for clarity and correct plural usage.

× So these are the thing that I usually have to remember everyday.

✓ So these are the things that I usually have to remember every day.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'these'. 'Everyday' is an adjective meaning common; the correct phrase is 'every day' meaning each day.

× Well, I usually write on my notebook apart from this by setting the alarm I I can easily remember my thing.

✓ Well, I usually write in my notebook. Apart from this, by setting the alarm, I can easily remember my things.

'Write on my notebook' should be 'write in my notebook' because we write inside a notebook. 'My thing' should be plural 'my things' to indicate multiple items. The sentence is split for clarity.

× Apart from this there are many occasions like birthday and many as anniversary and any function on the weekend that I usually write on my notebook as well as.

✓ Apart from this, there are many occasions like birthdays, anniversaries, and functions on the weekend that I usually write in my notebook as well.

'Birthday' and 'anniversary' should be plural to indicate multiple occasions. 'Write on my notebook' should be 'write in my notebook'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct plural usage.