记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. For example, say clearly if you are good at memorising or not, then explain why with examples.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when I visit new places. For instance, I try to remember the names of local people and interesting spots because it helps me enjoy my trips more.

建议: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct answer, then explain the situation with specific details and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I missed a fixed meeting with my cousin because of a personal problem. I realized my mistake later and felt sorry about it.

建议: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Give a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples with linking words. Try to avoid repeating words and incomplete thoughts.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks related to my work and studies. For example, I often review topics continuously to prepare well for my future exams.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and structure. Start with a clear statement, then explain your methods with specific details and linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

示例: I try to stay active and pay attention to important information to help me remember. Also, I take notes because I tend to forget things easily.

× I don't memorize the Pi memorize because but when I was memorized, when I was exploring new places, especially the new people, local people and who are are really enjoyable to talking.

✓ I don't memorize Pi, but when I was memorizing, when I was exploring new places, especially new local people who are really enjoyable to talk to.

The phrase 'when I was memorized' is incorrect because 'memorized' is the past participle form and cannot be used in this context. The correct form is the past continuous 'was memorizing' to indicate an ongoing action in the past. Also, 'enjoyable to talking' should be 'enjoyable to talk to' to use the correct verb form and preposition.

× especially the new people, local people and who are are really enjoyable to talking.

✓ especially new local people who are really enjoyable to talk to.

The phrase 'and who are are' contains a repeated verb and incorrect pronoun usage. It should be 'who are' without repetition. Also, 'enjoyable to talking' is incorrect; the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to talk' with the preposition 'to'.

× And I think this kind of thing I try to memorize these people and also places is and which is which.

✓ And I think in this kind of situation, I try to memorize these people and places.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper structure. Simplifying and clarifying the sentence improves understanding. The phrase 'is and which is which' is unclear and unnecessary.

× Yes, I forget many thing, especially one of the most I forget it acting is a meeting with my cousin and which is really important and and this is the meeting the fix.

✓ Yes, I forget many things, especially one important thing I forgot, which was a meeting with my cousin and it was really important, and this was a fixed meeting.

'Many thing' should be 'many things' to match plural form. Also, 'I forget it acting is a meeting' is incorrect; it should be 'I forgot, which was a meeting'. The tense should be past to match the context.

× but I have a a personal problem and and that's thing I forget it and I I I realize.

✓ but I had a personal problem and because of that, I forgot it and I realized.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'I have' should be 'I had' to maintain past tense consistency. 'That's thing' is unclear and should be 'because of that'. 'Forget' should be 'forgot' and 'realize' should be 'realized' to match past tense.

× I remember my daily life our like my work or my study, and especially when I read a topic or topic, then I try to continuously read it, that kind of thing and which is really helpful.

✓ I remember things in my daily life like my work or my study, and especially when I read a topic, I try to read it continuously, which is really helpful.

The phrase 'I remember my daily life our like' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I remember things in my daily life like'. Also, 'then I try to continuously read it' is better as 'I try to read it continuously' for correct adverb placement.

× My future exam, which is dependent on my how strong I am my.

✓ My future exam depends on how strong I am.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and structure. 'Which is dependent on my how strong I am my' is incorrect. It should be simplified to 'depends on how strong I am'.

× OK, I try to always active and recognize thing in and and this this kind of thing and really memorize.

✓ OK, I try to always be active and recognize things, and this kind of thing really helps me memorize.

'Try to always active' is incorrect; it should be 'try to always be active'. 'Recognize thing in and and this this kind of thing' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'recognize things, and this kind of thing really helps me memorize'.

× I think and I I can and also I take a note, which is really important to my memorize thing and and because I, I'm a person who always forget.

✓ I think I can, and I also take notes, which is really important for my memorization because I am a person who always forgets.

The sentence has repeated pronouns and incorrect verb forms. 'I take a note' should be 'I take notes' (plural). 'Important to my memorize thing' should be 'important for my memorization'. 'Who always forget' should be 'who always forgets' to agree with the singular subject.