记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且用更自然的表达方式来说明你擅长记忆数字但不擅长记忆长文本。

示例: I'm not very good at memorising everything, but I find it easier to remember numbers like phone numbers. However, memorising long texts is quite difficult for me because it requires a lot of effort.

建议: 回答内容较完整，但有些语法和表达不够准确。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并且用更准确的时态和表达方式描述忘记重要事情的经历和应对方法。

示例: Yes, I often forget important things like meetings or deadlines. To avoid this, I set reminders on my phone or WeChat, which helps me stay organized and not miss anything.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议直接回答问题，避免重复动词，并且用更自然的表达说明你需要记忆的内容和难点。

示例: As a finance and accounting student, I need to remember course materials like financial calculations and accounting principles, which can be quite challenging.

建议: 回答中有重复和不连贯的地方，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并且用连贯的句子描述你记忆重要事情的方法。

示例: I usually remember important things by taking notes during lectures. After class, I review my notes carefully to help me retain the information.

× Well, I'm not sure about that 'cause I think it it mostly depends on what type of information is.

✓ Well, I'm not sure about that 'cause I think it mostly depends on what type of information it is.

句子中“it it”重复，应删除一个“it”；此外，句子结构中“what type of information is”应改为“what type of information it is”，符合英语中宾语从句的语序。

× For example, I'm gradually I really good at memorizing the number, ex.

✓ For example, I'm gradually getting really good at memorizing numbers, e.g.

句子中“I'm gradually I really good”结构错误，应使用“I'm gradually getting really good”；“the number”应改为复数“numbers”，因为泛指数字；“ex.”应改为“e.g.”表示举例。

× For example the phone number.

✓ For example, phone numbers.

“the phone number”应改为复数形式“phone numbers”，因为泛指多种电话号码。

× But I'm really not. But I'm really not good at memorizing the long text 'cause it needs a lot of it 'cause it.

✓ But I'm really not good at memorizing long texts because it requires a lot of effort.

句子结构混乱，重复“But I'm really not”，且“the long text”应改为复数“long texts”；“it needs a lot of it 'cause it”表达不清，应改为“because it requires a lot of effort”。

× For example, I'm really, I'm really not good at memorizing some things such as I will like forgot some important meetings or deadlines.

✓ For example, I'm really not good at memorizing some things such as important meetings or deadlines, and I sometimes forget them.

句子中“I will like forgot”时态和结构错误，应改为“I sometimes forget”；“such as I will like forgot some important meetings”结构不正确，应拆分并调整。

× So in order to deal with it, I'll set the reminders on my WeChat to help me stay organized and not miss anything.

✓ So in order to deal with it, I set reminders on my WeChat to help me stay organized and not miss anything.

根据上下文，描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，“I'll set”改为“I set”。

× Well I'm currently a university student majoring in the finance and accounting, so usually I have to remember memorize something related to my course knowledge such as the financial calculations or the accounting principles, which is pretty hard for me to remember.

✓ Well, I'm currently a university student majoring in finance and accounting, so usually I have to memorize something related to my course knowledge such as financial calculations or accounting principles, which are pretty hard for me to remember.

“the finance and accounting”中不需要定冠词“the”；“remember memorize”重复，应去掉“remember”；“the financial calculations or the accounting principles”中定冠词不必要；“which is”应改为“which are”，因为前面提到了复数。

× Well, let me think about that. Umm, Julie, I remember things using pen and take note.

✓ Well, let me think about that. Umm, usually, I remember things by using a pen and taking notes.

“using pen and take note”表达不完整，应改为“by using a pen and taking notes”；“note”应为复数“notes”；缺少冠词“a pen”。

× Usually. I often would need to remember things about the college coursework.

✓ Usually, I often need to remember things related to college coursework.

“remember things about the college coursework”表达不自然，应改为“remember things related to college coursework”；“would need”不符合语境，改为“need”。

× Then I'll listen the lecture and listen the lecture and then take note and then read.

✓ Then I'll listen to the lecture, take notes, and then read.

“listen the lecture”应为“listen to the lecture”；“take note”应为“take notes”；句子重复“listen the lecture”且结构不流畅，应简化。