记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达不够自然，语法错误较多，且没有直接回答问题。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子表达观点，同时避免语法错误。

示例: I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my belongings at home.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误严重，表达混乱。建议用简单明了的句子描述具体事件，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I once forgot my phone at a restaurant in the UK, but a waitress found it and returned it to me.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，注意句子连贯和词汇准确。

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments and to keep track of my devices like my iPad, computer, and phone, which I often misplace.

建议: 回答较为自然，但表达可以更流畅，连接词使用不够。建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富细节。

示例: At first, I tried to remember everything in my mind, but it was unreliable. So, I started using a To Do List, which helps me organize and remember important tasks more effectively.

× Memorizing things may not be my advantages because I usually lose something in my living place.

✓ Memorizing things may not be my advantage because I usually lose something in my living place.

这里的“advantages”是复数形式，但前面有“my”，表示单数所有格，应该用单数“advantage”。

× Yes, of course my phone was forgotten by my memory in a UK currency and then the waitress catched me to find back my phone.

✓ Yes, of course my phone was forgotten by my memory in a UK currency and then the waitress caught me to find back my phone.

动词“catch”的过去式是“caught”，不是“catched”。

× Yes, of course my phone was forgotten by my memory in a UK currency and then the waitress catched me to find back my phone.

✓ Yes, of course my phone was forgotten by my memory in a UK currency and then the waitress caught me to help me find my phone.

短语“find back”不正确，应该用“help me find my phone”来表达“帮我找回手机”。

× I must remember a list of time including the academic things and the daily life related things like my iPad, computer and my phones, which I usually lost.

✓ I must remember a list of times including academic things and daily life related things like my iPad, computer and my phone, which I usually lose.

“a list of time”应为“a list of times”，因为“list”后面接复数名词；“phones”应为单数“phone”，因为通常指一个手机。

× I must remember a list of time including the academic things and the daily life related things like my iPad, computer and my phones, which I usually lost.

✓ I must remember a list of times including academic things and daily life related things like my iPad, computer and my phone, which I usually lose.

句子中“which I usually lost”时态不对，表示习惯动作应使用一般现在时“lose”。

× I originally remember all things by my mind, but you know, it was so unreliable.

✓ I originally remember all things in my mind, but you know, it was so unreliable.

习惯用法是“in my mind”，而不是“by my mind”。

× And then I tried to remember something by my To Do List which can help me schedule more easily.

✓ And then I tried to remember something with my To Do List which can help me schedule more easily.

“by my To Do List”用法不当，应该用“with my To Do List”表示借助某物。