记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear and direct response first, then support it with specific examples or reasons using linking words to improve flow. Avoid contradicting yourself without explanation.

示例: I am quite good at memorising things, especially when I focus. For example, I can remember important dates easily. However, sometimes I forget small details, like where I put my keys, which can be frustrating.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by structuring it better and using clearer linking words. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to be more specific about the situation.

示例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, yesterday my friend asked me to complete her assignment because she was busy. Unfortunately, I forgot until last night, but I managed to finish it within 30 minutes.

建议: Your answer is a bit unfocused and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Also, avoid unnecessary information and check your grammar for clarity.

示例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as appointments and tasks. However, the most common thing I forget is where I place my phone, which can be quite frustrating.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid contradictions without explanation and expand your answer slightly.

示例: Although I sometimes forget important things, I usually write them down in my mobile's Note app. This method helps me remember tasks quickly and stay organised throughout the day.

× I forgot what I just did now.

✓ I forgot what I just did.

The sentence mixes past tense 'forgot' with 'now' which indicates present. 'Now' should be removed to maintain past tense consistency.

× It was just yesterday I was told to do assignment of my friend because she was busy.

✓ It was just yesterday I was told to do my friend's assignment because she was busy.

The phrase 'do assignment of my friend' is incorrect. It should be 'do my friend's assignment' to show possession and correct noun usage.

× Uh, I forgot to do that and I remember it at last night and I did it within 30 minutes.

✓ Uh, I forgot to do that and I remembered it last night and I did it within 30 minutes.

The verb 'remember' should be in past tense 'remembered' to match the past time 'last night'. Also, 'at last night' is incorrect; 'last night' alone is correct.

× It is the worst thing I for.

✓ It is the worst thing I forget.

The verb 'for' is incorrect here; it should be 'forget' to complete the meaning of the sentence.

× Usually I forgot the important things.

✓ Usually I forget important things.

The adverb 'usually' indicates habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used instead of past tense 'forgot'.