记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại ý không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng để thể hiện ý tưởng của bạn một cách tự nhiên.

示例: I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget details quickly, so I try to write important information down to help me remember.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp còn nhiều lỗi. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho sự kiện đã xảy ra và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, once I forgot my boyfriend's birthday. He was very angry, so I had to do many things to make him feel better. It was a memorable experience for me.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu câu trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng liên từ phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để tăng tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

示例: I need to remember special days like birthdays and anniversaries. I usually write them in my calendar so I don't forget important dates for me and my family.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng danh từ số nhiều khi nói về nhiều thứ, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

示例: I remember important things by using an app on my phone. I write down special events and passwords, and the app reminds me when I forget them.

× I'm not really good at memorizing things in my country to have afraid to talk about some people, not good at memories.

✓ I'm not really good at memorizing things; in my country, people are afraid to talk about some things, and I'm not good at remembering.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has unclear phrasing. 'In my country to have afraid' is incorrect; it should be 'in my country, people are afraid'. Also, 'not good at memories' should be 'not good at remembering'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper preposition use.

× Memories thing like fish brain, goldfish brain.

✓ My memory is like a fish's brain, a goldfish's brain.

The phrase 'Memories thing like fish brain' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Memories' is a noun, but here it should be 'my memory' (singular). Also, possessive form 'fish's brain' is needed to describe the type of brain. The correction uses proper adjective and noun forms.

× So I am a goldfish brain.

✓ So I have a goldfish brain.

'I am a goldfish brain' incorrectly uses 'am' with a noun phrase that is not a person. The correct expression is 'I have a goldfish brain' to indicate poor memory. This corrects the pronoun and verb usage.

× Once when I when I love my boyfriend, I have forgotten his birthday and he's very angry with me.

✓ Once, when I loved my boyfriend, I forgot his birthday and he was very angry with me.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'When I love' should be past tense 'when I loved', and 'I have forgotten' should be simple past 'I forgot' to match the past context. Also, 'he's very angry' should be 'he was very angry' to maintain past tense consistency.

× After that I need to do a lot of things to get him calmed down and it's a memories with me.

✓ After that, I needed to do a lot of things to calm him down, and it's a memory for me.

'Get him calmed down' is awkward; 'calm him down' is correct. 'It's a memories' is incorrect; 'memory' is singular here. Also, 'with me' should be 'for me' to express possession of the memory. The prepositions and word forms are corrected.

× And to remember a special day in my daily life, I need to take note in my calendar and it will help me to remember which day is special with me or with my other people in my family.

✓ To remember special days in my daily life, I need to take notes in my calendar, and it helps me remember which days are special to me or to other people in my family.

'Take note in my calendar' should be 'take notes in my calendar'. 'Special with me' is incorrect; it should be 'special to me'. 'Other people in my family' is better than 'my other people in my family'. Prepositions and plural forms are corrected for clarity.

× To remember important thing by using an app, an techno app in my phone and I write everything special in my life in there and it will remind me when I don't remember it, especially the password of about my Internet account.

✓ To remember important things, I use a tech app on my phone, and I write everything special in my life there. It reminds me when I forget, especially passwords for my Internet accounts.

'Important thing' should be plural 'important things'. 'An techno app' is incorrect; 'a tech app' is correct. 'In my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Password of about my Internet account' is awkward; 'passwords for my Internet accounts' is clearer. The sentence is corrected for singular/plural agreement and preposition use.