记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够自然，表达重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when I was in primary school, I quickly memorised some poems and can still remember them even after a month.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，补充具体细节，并使用连贯的句子表达。

示例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, during my freshman year four years ago, I forgot my ID card in my dormitory, which caused me some trouble.

建议: 回答内容重复且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并注意句子完整性。

示例: I need to remember to bring my car keys every day because I drive to work. Without the keys, I cannot use my car.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

示例: When I have important tasks like paying for exams, I usually make notes on my phone and set alarms to remind myself on time.

× For example, when I studied in primary school, my teacher let hold classes to remember some Tom poems that I memorized those poems very quickly and after maybe one month until now, I also remember it.

✓ For example, when I studied in primary school, my teacher let us hold classes to remember some Tom poems. I memorized those poems very quickly, and after maybe one month until now, I still remember them.

句子中缺少了“us”作为宾语，且句子结构混乱，应该拆分成两个句子。动词时态使用正确，但句子结构错误导致表达不清。建议注意句子完整性和主谓宾结构。

× For example, when I studied in primary school, my teacher let hold classes to remember some Tom poems that I memorized those poems very quickly and after maybe one month until now, I also remember it.

✓ For example, when I studied in primary school, my teacher let us hold classes to remember some Tom poems. I memorized those poems very quickly, and after maybe one month until now, I still remember them.

原句中缺少宾语代词“us”，且后半句中“it”指代不明确，应该用复数代词“them”指代“poems”。建议注意代词的正确使用和指代一致。

× Like when I'm in my freshman year 4 years ago I forgot my ID card in my dormitory but this time I have to.

✓ Like when I was in my freshman year 4 years ago, I forgot my ID card in my dormitory, but that time I had to deal with it.

“I'm”应改为过去时“was”，因为描述的是过去的事件。句子末尾“but this time I have to”不完整，需补充完整表达。建议注意时态一致和句子完整。

× Because I drive my car to my company to go to work, so I have to remember that I must bring my key for the car every day so that I can open.

✓ Because I drive my car to my company to go to work, I have to remember to bring my car key every day so that I can unlock it.

“bring my key for the car”中介词“for”用法不当，应该用“car key”表示车钥匙。句子中“so”与“because”重复，建议去掉“so”。建议注意介词的正确搭配和句子连贯。

× I can drive the car unless I can't drive the car but to.

✓ I can drive the car; otherwise, I can't drive it.

原句中“unless”和“but to”使用混乱，导致句子不通顺。建议使用“otherwise”表达转折，简洁明了。

× Sometimes when I need to pay for some exams in a certain time, I need to make notes on my cell phone and set an alarm to notice myself that there are something to do.

✓ Sometimes when I need to pay for some exams at a certain time, I make notes on my cell phone and set an alarm to remind myself that there is something to do.

“notice myself”用法错误，应该用“remind myself”。“there are something”中“are”与“something”数量不一致，应改为“there is something”。建议注意代词和动词搭配的正确使用。

× Sometimes when I need to pay for some exams in a certain time, I need to make notes on my cell phone and set an alarm to notice myself that there are something to do.

✓ Sometimes when I need to pay for some exams at a certain time, I make notes on my cell phone and set an alarm to remind myself that there is something to do.

“in a certain time”应改为“at a certain time”，表示具体时间点。建议注意介词的正确选择。