记忆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点，同时避免重复。

示例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget what I studied earlier when I have a new task to do.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议使用简单明了的句子，明确说明忘记的重要事情及原因，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, during my placements, I often forget instructions from my teacher. This makes me upset because I have studied the material before, but I get nervous and forget it.

建议: 回答中表达重复，句子结构简单且不够自然。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句型，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I use a calendar to help me remember my daily tasks. Whenever I learn about a new schedule, I add it to my calendar so I don't forget it.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，句子冗长且重复。建议简化句子结构，使用准确的词汇，并通过连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I usually use a calendar to remember important things, like tasks or appointments with friends. For example, I add these events to my calendar to keep track of them.

× I'm not good at memory things.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。memory是名词，不能直接修饰things。

× I always forget a lot of things such as when I study and when I have a task I will forget what I studied before so.

✓ I always forget a lot of things. For example, when I study or have a task, I will forget what I studied before.

原句结构混乱，缺少连接词和标点，导致表达不清晰。需要拆分成两个句子并用连接词使句子通顺。

× What I have in the placements, I always forget what the teacher tells me before and I feel very upset because that I have studied before but because of my nerves I forget about it.

✓ During my placements, I always forget what the teacher told me before and I feel very upset because I have studied it before, but because of my nerves, I forget it.

时态使用不当，'tells'应为过去式'told'，'have studied'用法正确，句子需要调整顺序和标点使表达更清晰。

× I will have the calendar to help me to memorize my daily life.

✓ I use a calendar to help me remember my daily life.

'have the calendar'用法不当，应该用'use a calendar'表示使用日历帮助记忆。

× Like every schedule, when I know it, I will add it to my calendar that will help me to memorize it.

✓ For every schedule I know, I add it to my calendar, which helps me remember it.

'Like every schedule'用法不当，应该用'For every schedule'更合适；'that will help me to memorize it'改为'which helps me remember it'更自然。

× I usually use a calendar to help me to memorize some important things such as some tasks or some I have like date with my friends like some schedules.

✓ I usually use a calendar to help me remember some important things such as tasks or dates with my friends, like schedules.

'some I have like date'结构不完整且单复数错误，应该改为'tasks or dates'，使表达清晰且符合语法。

× For examples I will add this to the calendar.

✓ For example, I will add this to the calendar.

'For examples'应为单数形式'For example'，表示举例。